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7/10. its okay...kind of boring though.

--in interesting people --in old books --in the woods, near waterfalls on sunny fall days --in an empty house --on the porch, watching the sunset or rise over the trees ...

I tend to skip prologues as well =/ I would probably take the prologue, if it's really important enough to be in the book, and make it the first chapter ...

Hey Allie! Welcome to YWS. We have a lot in common. First, I absolutely hate typing with capitals and apostrophi and what not if I am just in casual conversation...but ...

Has anyone seen this? I rented it this weekend and watched it...it's amazingly good. See it if you haven't! :D

I liked the authors style as well.... in the beginning. But then it really just died, like she got bored and needed more action.

I have never tried acting....but what I do do is read the story out loud--the spoken lines as well as the narrated. This, I think, has nearly the same affect ...

Aloha! Welcome to YWS!

I like the random warnings to people that read the wonder graveyards are longstanding "creepy" places. Nope, I don't have anymore. Those are the two best stones at the church....almost ...

Well...I tried to find the pictures we took at Trinity Church beside the World Trade Center [Ground Zero] in New York...but I couldn't--so, we took more. Here they are...they are ...

This is an accurate description of a hurricane. But, it's braf. You are saying all these things that happen in a hurricane, but you aren't showing us how they happen. ...

Please...take her suggestion and download it. We would all really appreciate this.

AH! Seriously. I think maybe we should have 'Critique Guidelines' posted somewhere within rules posts [because, apparently it is too much to ask people to read outside the rules...and even ...

"Nightmare" -eve 6

On the contrary, I thought the flow was too... flowy ? All the lines seem to have the same about of syllables in them, which I think is great for ...