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It's not macarena-ing, it's preparing to fight the dragons! which case, I suppose 4/10. I like black/white/grey, but it's kind of bland and the dragons are small and hard to ...

0/10 VOTE MONKEY!!

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Hey Mike, welcome to the YWS! I am not much for fantasy so I'm afraid I don't really have much in common with you there. But, if you ever have ...

I like them overeasy on rye, please. No, really though...I think it really depends on what the tone of the story/poem/whatever else that I am writing. I really like hyphens--I ...

It kind of sounds like it's been done before. ...like a really hot flame or something. Hehe. 8,629 Pointless Essays of Life (haha, from doing this I have gotten some ...

I have to agree that there were a few issues with this. I liked stanzas 1 and 3...but the other two were just alllll discombobulated. The main thing I see ...

Okay, the first thing I noticed is this is a bunch of whole and broken thoughts broken into stanzas...I'm not really sure that did anything for you at all. I ...

This didn't really do much for me. The style was not explicitly amazing or anything and the topics do not flow. I really didn't like that the poem was directed ...

10/10 VOTE MONKEY!!

7/10 It's okay, you definitely get props for the black/whiteness...but I'm not too fascinated with the 'fair lady' time slot.

Welcome to YWS Spark! I'm Meg, and although I mostly hang around the poetry forums, I LOVE realistic fiction and I'm really like to read some of your work! I ...

Haha this is quite an amazing little stupid comedy. Maybe.... YWS War I?

I see old women teaching young girls lessons about life. Anywhere close? 53 Cards

Juice juice juice juice juice!!! Especially orange juice and juices with three names [ie. strawberry apple banana--formally known as 'Pooh Juice' by the child]. JUICE!