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I see 'Big Mama'....or an older, african american woman, kind hearted but rather awkward. Myranda

"Haha, well...the usual: no shoes or socks, brassish nailpolish, cut-off jean shorts, a maroon spaghetti strap top, and my hair and down (and curly, naturally). If I didn't know you, ...

Well, there is all the grammar and puncuation errors that Disko pointed out (nice pick up, by the way). But, while I was reading it I felt like I was ...

Yes, I agree...I would stick to posting new work of yours--or at least within the last year. Something you write know will definitely be superior to something you wrote when ...

"Ha. I'm on an island...with ten kids under the age of ten and my parents. The nearest civilization is six miles away, what do you think?" --Annah "I'm never bored, ...

Of course we love to write, why else would we be here? :wink: English/Language Arts was always my best subject in school, and growing up my childhood was always a ...

No, you don't get a custom title until you are a writer, I believe dear.

Sasha remind me of a clown? So I say...probably a red head, doesn't really care what others think and probably wears bright colors and crazy outfits daily. Olivia

If you have been jumping around and checking out other, past critiques done by both snoink and I, you'd see how 'lavishly' we deal out praise...you really have a good ...

I like August....I love the 'month' names like July, or December...dunno why, it's weird but I like it lol. But august also reminds me of augustine from willy wonka, and ...

Yes, but if we learned from our past mistakes we wouldn't have gone at all :D America: a country run by the unsmart monkies.

Haha, thanks to a quick swahili lesson..."Thank you very much, squash banana" lol. That's true, that would be fun :D

I agree that it's our fault that their country is blown to shreds...but we left in Vietnam, didn't we? I just don't think we have anything left to offer to ...

Granted, but you are hit by a bus and killed before you get the chance to write in it. I wish I could find the paperwork for my laptop.

Brad, I love you at this very moment. Let's get married. XD