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So, I have been gone for a week and currently have 2706 posts to catch up on......will someone please explain to me what the stars are??? =]

The car ride from Utah to Tennessee was the worst to come out of our whole situation. The kids and I stopped at a hotel overnight twice, but that still ...

Darklight--thank you for the criticism! Let me follow up on some of your points... Art and I had gotten ourselves pregnant [...] I'm not sure if there actually is a ...

Whence, thank you for the crit! Mmm I agree with the first stanza not being the best...I had a hard time coming up with an opening that would shout because ...

It's ....ok. You can do better so it wasn't overly impressive. Bacon churns my stomach, though. Eck. Bob Evans ruined that for me.

Give me a little while to decide what I think about prose poetry and how to address it in a helpful way, and I will get back to you on ...

I'm not entirely sure I would call this a poem. It's not bad, per se, it's just not really poetry. It's more a descriptive piece of writing. *moved to other ...

I like many of these, but my favorite was the Streetcar--of course! I love colors ;) What was that done with?

I actually liked this very much. I saw it when it was first posted, but I 'm so friggin' tired of suicide and wrist cutting and all that jazz poems ...

In his twenties, ridiculously sexy and dark, never really says much but always has on an expression as if he's thinking about all the problems in the world and how ...

I feel like this would serve better as narrative poetry. The story is actually very good, but 'dramatic poetry' is not very fitting to the piece. If it is in ...

Mm yay, harshness. "We're all wearing masks"...well wippifriggindo. That's only the 98293843rd time I've heard that. Cliche much? It is not bad, per se, to do something that has potential ...

It's nice to have such an open person aboard...hehe! Welcome to the YWS! Ciao, WM

Congrats guys! *throws streamers*

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