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Re: Sneaky Guy
It's pretty good. The mouth/chin area is a little awkward. I would make the eyes the same color (even with light on one they are still a little closer to ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: 100 challenges
I like it! The colors are a little washed out...but I assume if you like it it's all good! Good drawing, still!
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Lineless Art from Yours Truely
I definitely like the second background better. I like the drawing too! =]
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Areida's photos
The first sunset is amazing! So pretty. The second is okay, would be better without the random white post. Mmm, I'm no so much for the flower ones--not because of ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
3/10 I smell an inside joke.
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Re: The I-Doser
It definitely sound interesting, and definitely Brave New World-ish. Hmm. If I was given a shot to do it for free, I might do it just to make up my ...
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Hello!
Welcome to the YWS! I have a serious problem sticking to one story as well, haha, and am also majoring in English! Although I'm a sophomore in the major already. ...
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Hey, what's up?
Welcome to the YWS! We have a group on here called Band Geeks Anonymous that you may want to consider joining! Anyway, hope you enjoy the site! Ciao, WM
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Allergy-Free Car
*worships allergy-free car* stupid pollen. *itches eyes*
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Hey, I'm Jane.
Welcome to the YWS, Jane!
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: New!
Hey Raine! Welcome to the YWS! What do you write? Ciao, WM
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: Wall Painting
My best friend and I painted this on the wall of our highschool during our senior year. You can pretty much ignore anything that isn't green or blue, those are ...
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: Winnie The Pooh
It is cute. As mentioned previously, maybe gradualize the shading a little bit more? But, other than that it's pretty good!
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Re: Daddy Say's He Loves You
I actually quite like the idea of this. I think my favorite stanza is the first one, however. But, as previously commented, the rhyme scheme changes and that's not particularly ...
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Re: Eat Your Mushrooms!
Mmm. Okay. Mushrooms are apparently very diverse. It was random, kind of random to a point past "funny" and onto "uh, whaa?" and I can't say that's truly a good ...
Jun 3, 2007
