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Welcome to the YWS Sarah! Yes, the YWS is a great place to get feedback! I'm glad you have joined, and hope you enjoy the site. Feel free to PM ...

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Yea, sounds good.....but what would the storybook really be about? That's kind of a deal breaker/maker to a participation decision. Also, would there be certain rules to follow on the ...

Either very handsome or obnixiously geeky. Either way, very smart. Destined for greatness. Or serial killer tendencies. Shelby White

He's evil, secretly. He's like the leader of all evil, actually. Or, maybe that dudes offspring. He's early twenties. Chase Roberts

Woo! Hey! That's me! .... I have a ship?

Actually I thought this was pretty good. One error that irked me: And you know if you ever start to wonder where those years have gone, all you have to ...

Hmm, I have to say I wasn't overly joyed by it either. First, I really don't know what happened at the end? That confused me much. But the dialogue is ...

8/10 It's kind of boring, but it's black and white so it wins.

8/10 Haha

HAHA! That's so funny because I did that this summer in my house! Really, it was really fun! And hard. I used the big square mirror and the small too. ...

8/10 I like that your name is on it!

7/10 It is spelled weird, and it kind of makes me twitch...a lot.

I'm a little prejudice against the flower photo because I'm so tired of pictures of flowers I could fall over dead if I see one more. I'm kind of the ...

I'm with Kitty on this one...there isn't enough here to even make out what it is let alone critique it. Post it up again when it's done a little more.