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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perfect

    Jenny-- The message behind this is nice. It's strong, it's very teenage-angst-fighting-y. Which is good for this site and the people who are most likely going to read it. However. ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eulogy

    Eric-- I actually quite like this! I like that it's not completely broken, but isn't exactly complete sentences. The imagery is great. Too often we see poems that don't do ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Roxxie

    Rayne-- This is really 100 times better than what I could do with a computer generated character. I can see the personality in her eyes, which is awesome. But, there ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: name association

    Scranton is a teenager--late teens, maybe. Glasses wearer, acne, skinny and only spikes his red hair. Kind of a harry potter, but 100 times less cool. Addie Morgan

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Last Ride

    Miral-- I think this is a good start to a possible poem. However, it's really not dramatic poetry--it's really just dramatic. There is such a thing as prose poetry, but ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: His Shoes

    Eight years gone by. Eight years he's been gone. Eight Christmases. Eight New Years. A man has a coin holder. It pops open like his did. A man has his ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Linguists

    Linguists Language loving literists. Big, bigger, biggest. Commas, colons, hyphens. Semicolons? Wrong. Fun, funner, funnest-- Right, wrong; seriously? Where is your dog at? Prepositional failure. Regi

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Forest gaze

    shauni-- This is the start of a great shot! It's cute, and straight forward. To me, though, it seems like her eyes need to pop a bit more. I don't ...

    Nov 11, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Pics from my photography class

    iRandom-- The first of these photos is fantastic. The focus is great, the color is great--everything is perfect! The others are okay. Certainly aren't bad, just aren't amazing either. They ...

    Nov 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: striving to know me.

    striving-- I like the concreteness of these poem. The small-big-small structure is kind of a cool idea. However, variety is sometimes your friend. There are a lot of "I hate ...

    Nov 11, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: What Goes Here?

    *bump*

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Racism.

    Hi Tim, I think that the idea behind this poem is inspirational, but maybe a little lost in the style. To me, this reads more like a rant that coincidentally ...

    Jun 6, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Stream of Airport

    I sit in an airport on a layover in Newark, New Jersey. The flight here only had seven passengers. The flight to Maine is bound to be as small. I ...

    Apr 2, 2009
  • Archive Re: Mafia Italia

    PLEASE direct all questions to the DT thread or PM. Thanks!

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Archive Re: Mafia Italia

    Joah de Luca She glanced at her father as he ignored her, and raised a brow ' see, this is why I don't come here anymore .' Joah shrugged, just ...

    Mar 20, 2009


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