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Re: Perfect
Jenny-- The message behind this is nice. It's strong, it's very teenage-angst-fighting-y. Which is good for this site and the people who are most likely going to read it. However. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Eulogy
Eric-- I actually quite like this! I like that it's not completely broken, but isn't exactly complete sentences. The imagery is great. Too often we see poems that don't do ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Roxxie
Rayne-- This is really 100 times better than what I could do with a computer generated character. I can see the personality in her eyes, which is awesome. But, there ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: name association
Scranton is a teenager--late teens, maybe. Glasses wearer, acne, skinny and only spikes his red hair. Kind of a harry potter, but 100 times less cool. Addie Morgan
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Last Ride
Miral-- I think this is a good start to a possible poem. However, it's really not dramatic poetry--it's really just dramatic. There is such a thing as prose poetry, but ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: His Shoes
Eight years gone by. Eight years he's been gone. Eight Christmases. Eight New Years. A man has a coin holder. It pops open like his did. A man has his ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Linguists
Linguists Language loving literists. Big, bigger, biggest. Commas, colons, hyphens. Semicolons? Wrong. Fun, funner, funnest-- Right, wrong; seriously? Where is your dog at? Prepositional failure. Regi
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Forest gaze
shauni-- This is the start of a great shot! It's cute, and straight forward. To me, though, it seems like her eyes need to pop a bit more. I don't ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Pics from my photography class
iRandom-- The first of these photos is fantastic. The focus is great, the color is great--everything is perfect! The others are okay. Certainly aren't bad, just aren't amazing either. They ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: striving to know me.
striving-- I like the concreteness of these poem. The small-big-small structure is kind of a cool idea. However, variety is sometimes your friend. There are a lot of "I hate ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: What Goes Here?
*bump*
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Racism.
Hi Tim, I think that the idea behind this poem is inspirational, but maybe a little lost in the style. To me, this reads more like a rant that coincidentally ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Stream of Airport
I sit in an airport on a layover in Newark, New Jersey. The flight here only had seven passengers. The flight to Maine is bound to be as small. I ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Mafia Italia
PLEASE direct all questions to the DT thread or PM. Thanks!
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Mafia Italia
Joah de Luca She glanced at her father as he ignored her, and raised a brow ' see, this is why I don't come here anymore .' Joah shrugged, just ...
Mar 20, 2009
