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Hey hey hey it's me again HO Ho ho! I will keep this review rather brief seeing how many things from my previous review can be applied to thing work ...

Hello, hello. I am Secret Santa HO Ho ho! The poem itself is alright but it definitely can use some improvement in a number of areas. The first big thing ...

Hello. This work sounds pretty interesting. There are a few things, though, that could be improved. For some reason the sentence about masks, at the end of paragraph 2, sounds ...

Hello. It would be interesting to read chapter 1, this segment reads like a prologue and for the sake of this review I will treat it as such. It is ...

I hope that you want my honest opinion and nothing else. The work so far is alright but there were a few things that deterred me from the story. First ...

Great work. I enjoyed this work. I do have a few small but broad critiques in regards to this work though. The first is, for some reason, the dialogue was ...

Interesting work. Morning , it seems, already has covered the technical aspects of your piece so I guess I will try my best to critique a more subjective part of ...

Interesting article but it seems to concentrate on two different themes that of science and that of human morality. Since it is probably a thought provoking work I will not ...

In all honestly it's absolutely alright. People have different ways of coping with what some call writer's block. I usually just take a break from writing and substitute it with ...

Hello. I will try to review the second part soon. I thought it was good, though, I think there are a couple of aspects of the story that could be ...

I was not expecting it to be so open in a sense but it was good. The last two lines of the first stanza had very odd rhyming to it. ...

Interesting piece. I liked it but I did have a few problems with it. For me the beginning was a bit slow and stale. It felt like reading a textbook, ...

Another great chapter. I like how your tone, narration and dialogue is consistent with chapter 1. My only suggestion is to add more atmosphere. The events in this chapter have ...

The story is great and has an amazing potential. The only problem I had with it is that it left too many many aspects of the story unanswered and overall ...

I found the story to be very well written. The are only a two aspects that I would direct my attention to. In the story, mostly in the first half ...