Veracelle

I like it... very real.. gave me chills! I think you have talent!!!!

Third Day Last night, after bumping the stinky, hot belly of the metal monster, the Man let me outside. I saw a big, torn-down, gross house and I heard faint ...

Whoa. that is beautiful! I love the contrast from one side of the moon to the other... PS: try not to make your pictures so big! the moon was kind ...

Wow, the first one is sooooo pretty! i love the movement and music notes! It makes you want to hear what beautiful song she is playing! The second one, well.... ...

erm, it is kind of second-grader ish. kill the tear and make it more angry and not "yay"... rawr! dragons are supposed to say "RAWR!" not *sniff*

I liked it... very illustrative..... sets a scene.... rating 7/10..... you could do better!

WOW, i really like it. It sounds very chic (if a poem can sound like that). It really sounds like a little romantic-struck girl singing this song while walking down ...

It is... okay. the rhymes FIT and everything, but there's not emotion, no feeling, no flow or scene to set. You can be a great poet, everyone can! just make ...

I love your poem! It makes me think and imagine, which i love. Keep writing! It is certainly very color and it is very versatile!

WOW! I love that poem! (even if I don't have one and its for Kellie... :) ) I love the imagination and graceful flow of the sentences. The song of ...

"Breeder" is a human, kind of like a human companion to them. they do not love her, but she is all that they know of the human world and learn ...

The First Day Everyone is big. Everyone is tall, all those humans. A man came in today. He looked at me funny and asked Breeder something. I heard the words ...

WOW. it really makes you think about it and read between the lines. Very interesting, kind of weird. But very good. I love that Shiny teeth, a winning token. Motionlessly ...

I like it. It is very descriptive. I like the "Drip, drop on my skin". It almost sounds young, like an innocent child making up a song about the beautiful ...

The Shriners with their tiny bikes Are children with their candy stripes Catching The sun light leapt from to and fro. Who exactly are the Shriners? Do you mean Shiners? ...