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Re: Requiem
Starts out: Orchard owner's daughter walking down a row of trees....Sees a stranger...Blah, blah, blah. Anyways, this is probably my first attempted story having anything to do with 'romance'. So ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Crystal Stars First Try. Please skip to REAL first chapter.
Do not let the size of this story frighten you. :oops: Hey, my name’s Nova, though I don’t know where I got it. I was an urchin, living in the ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Old Story!
Okay, I happened upon this story....And well, each time I read it....I feel really sad because, now I know how well I wrote when I was twelve. Back then, I ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Ideas!
I just had a sudden urge to create a storybook-Though the problem is: What idea should I use? Would you guys like a fanfic storybook (Twilight, Harry Potter...Warriors)? Or a ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: How do you write a good mystery?
I'm not quite sure how to write a mystery myself, but here are some solid tips: -Avoid foreshadowing, ( Little did she know what would happen....Etc.) -Start the story dynamically, ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Harry Who?
Throughout every single sentence I read, the whole story seemed to scream ',FANGIRL!' A girl that meets all the main characters almost instantly, and to make matters worst-It mimics the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Roamers
Can I squeeze into here? Name: Terra Rose ( People often call her 'rose' to annoy her. She hardly never says her last name.) Appearance: Thick honey colored hair, Emerald ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
Homer suddenly vanished into the Magical realm of Man-Eating dounuts, where he raged a war with them by recruiting clones of himself. The battle was long, and it seemed that ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: The Trick Of Fate
To Haruno: I agree, that was kind of harsh. xD For the 'quites' I use them because, well it just sounds better to me at least. Lemony Snicket? Never read ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Runaway : The Journey of thieves {chapter 1}
(Have tolerance! I'm new to reviewing.) [The sound of treading black stallions on the rocky paths chased us everywhere we went. We could never escape the haunting sound; it was ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Leoni
Actually, I don't think there's much wrong with the story-Its exceptional. The description of the town was quite well done, really brings the whole mood out into the story. Other ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: The Trick Of Fate
It was a marvelous day, the sun smiled at this town especially; even the sparrows were flocking about singing to the townsfolk, while the innocent children danced about amongst the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Welcome
I'm going to keep this short and sweet. Hello everyone! I'm forteen, somewhat of an writer, and I'm in Advanced English in High School. Going to try to submit some ...
Jan 4, 2009
