Venturepants

This is too personal for me to critique in anyway at all. But I have to say, the feeling you convey is very powerful. I can feel it when I ...

We see a world without words. Without belief. No faith. 'Evil is the root of everything,' they scream. 'I beg to differ,' I whisper. Finding an answer, so difficult. Are ...

The first time I read through this two things really got to me: your imagery is fantastic and you're a big fan, whether on purpose or by accident, of alliterations. ...

It had been sixteen hours since I'd been on the ground. The plane had hummed me to a semi-conscious state of sleep when the seat belt light dinged on. It ...

It may take a million years to write this letter down And all that I have time for is the truth inside this pen So hold on to all the ...

I see the rawness of this piece. We're inside the mind of seriously confused man, obviously he's frustrated and since this "blackout" thing has happened before. This is the third ...

Silence. Does not come easily anymore. Every second is full of voices, or cars, or static. The woman on the TV tells me of pain across the world And I ...

Inspired by Bang Bang by Nancy Sinatra An empty dusty town, laying abandoned in the ground. Playground swings lie immobile Church bells hang, crying silently In this place no one ...

This is a very new style and I totally dig it! never before have i seen a poem laid out like a play involving scenes like this, it's very novel ...

This poem just emanates all things dark and demonic! Shadows gather poisonously onto flesh, as the hissing pentacle rises again upon the sepulchre doors of the damned. This is my ...

This sounds very personal, and very real. It became extremely emotional and the turning point really hit me when the bit about the masks began; suicide thoughts. It's intense, like ...

I love the last line, always gets to me :)

Panic starts to rise, I feel dirty, uncomfortable. The music fades and you slip Away, and I flee to my safe zone. This part right here is very realistic. People ...

They went sliding around the beautiful ballroom floor, lanterns and candles ablaze as they zoomed elegantly around the spacious hall. Everything was silent except for the carefully orchestrated slidin