Ventomology

Since there will only be one or two more chapters, I've been re-writing it over and over again to make sure it's epic AND ties up all the loose ends. ...

I hate to admit, but the appearance bit is going to be a joke. I suppose I should have her get flustered? And I'm not sure if I mentioned, but ...

Hey thanks for reading this! And you're right about the length of the dialogue sentences. I'll watch for that while I'm editing the final chapters.

Thanks so much for reviewing me all the time! (Sometimes I can't believe the mistakes I make, so I'm glad I have someone who notices them!) I'll go back in ...

Oh crap... I forgot to edit Carrie's part after re-writing the torture scene! Oh my gosh thank you so much for finding that! (I feel like I'm losing my touch ...

Well, since you're offering, I'll be posting 'pilot' chapters of some possible projects soon. It would be nice to have those reviewed (not just on writing and style, but on ...

Oh, yeah... I didn't do so much characterization in the first few chapters... I'll make a note of that and introduce better characters next time I start a new piece. ...

Thanks a bunch!

Well, in response to the first question, they do still feel pain... (I hope I did an okay job with that?) And you're right, the fight scene should include some ...

Thank you for reviewing! (And yeah, I probably shouldn't assume that everyone reads scientific journals...)

It's nice to see you again! Thanks for reviewing, and you are so right! I guess when I review other people I should think about it and see what techniques ...

Whoa! It makes me so happy to see that people are reading through all my chapters! Thanks a bunch!

Oh my gosh! I can't believe I didn't catch those when I edited! Thank you so much for finding my mistakes!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely try variating sentence structures. (It'll be like learning German, only easier.)

Thanks a ton!