Ventomology

Well, since you're offering, I'll be posting 'pilot' chapters of some possible projects soon. It would be nice to have those reviewed (not just on writing and style, but on ...

Oh, yeah... I didn't do so much characterization in the first few chapters... I'll make a note of that and introduce better characters next time I start a new piece. ...

Thanks a bunch!

Well, in response to the first question, they do still feel pain... (I hope I did an okay job with that?) And you're right, the fight scene should include some ...

Thank you for reviewing! (And yeah, I probably shouldn't assume that everyone reads scientific journals...)

It's nice to see you again! Thanks for reviewing, and you are so right! I guess when I review other people I should think about it and see what techniques ...

Whoa! It makes me so happy to see that people are reading through all my chapters! Thanks a bunch!

Oh my gosh! I can't believe I didn't catch those when I edited! Thank you so much for finding my mistakes!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely try variating sentence structures. (It'll be like learning German, only easier.)

Thanks a ton!

Thank you!

Clearly, I should have given more thought to my characters... I must take this into account while I continue writing and while I plot out my next work... Anyways, thank ...

Ah, goodness. You're definitely right about the character reactions. I do have a good reason on Yvette's part, but the others... not so much. And thank you for your tip ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! Since you reminded me, I guess it's time to go through the coming chapters and edit some details in, huh? I never get enough ...

Thanks so much! I realize not everyone is a math geek, so that number systems thing must have been a little weird... And you're right about the character relationships. (I ...