Ventomology

Whoa! It makes me so happy to see that people are reading through all my chapters! Thanks a bunch!

Oh my gosh! I can't believe I didn't catch those when I edited! Thank you so much for finding my mistakes!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely try variating sentence structures. (It'll be like learning German, only easier.)

Thanks a ton!

Thank you!

Clearly, I should have given more thought to my characters... I must take this into account while I continue writing and while I plot out my next work... Anyways, thank ...

Ah, goodness. You're definitely right about the character reactions. I do have a good reason on Yvette's part, but the others... not so much. And thank you for your tip ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! Since you reminded me, I guess it's time to go through the coming chapters and edit some details in, huh? I never get enough ...

Thanks so much! I realize not everyone is a math geek, so that number systems thing must have been a little weird... And you're right about the character relationships. (I ...

Well, foreshadowing is like hinting vaguely at future events. Even the mentioning of a name or event can foreshadow something if used correctly. Like if you're writing a version of ...

Oh, and in my school, the bell rings before and after class, so I guess I'm just pulling from experience a bit much there. Thanks again!

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes and doing your signature red-pen editing! It helps a LOT. Also, the quantum bit is true. In order to coax atoms into a ...

As always, you're quick to pick up on what I only did mediocre on. Since I'm mostly done fiddling with the next chapter, I figured I'd change the dialogue a ...

Thank you for reviewing! I reread that piece, and you were so right, that ending wasn't nearly as good as some other ones. After a few hours mulling it over, ...

You're very right. I wouldn't act at all the way Noel does when she figures out Theo's creepy powers. But she's also a real ditz, and takes things pretty well. ...