Ventomology

I'm working on it right now! Thanks!

Um... most of that was on purpose, but thanks! Also, I guess my being a musician doesn't warrant the right to use musical terms, huh? Thanks for pointing that out!

*laughs evilly* I can't tell you that! And thanks for reading!

Thanks! I'll definitely fix those points you mentioned. I only hope the coming chapters can meet expectations...

Heh... I actually started this one to work on a problem I ran in to with my first piece of not adding enough detail! Looks like there's still a lot ...

Thank YOU! This is definitely a piece I plan on finishing.

Yeah, some of those wordings are awkward, but I'll fix them. Thanks for reviewing me!

Ah, okay. But I'd try posting sections of about 1000-1500 words. That's the length I use, it has been successful for me.

I'm willing to bet that most of the people on YWS don't use text language all that often-including me! But I think you did a good job anyway. (Certainly better ...

Heh, well... The people on the airship aren't all that important to the story so I sort of ignored them. Whoops. Thanks for catching all of that!

Um... I think the whole "crashed airship" is my cliff-hanger... Maybe it just wasn't suspenseful enough? What do you think I would do to make that a bit more dramatic? ...

Thanks for reading! (I only hope I can keep this up...)

Thanks so much for all your reviews and support while I worked on this! There is still a lot for me to do, and after I have my parents and ...

Well, if you remember, the mission was to keep the quantum device from doing anything to disrupt the universe. (I suppose I did a bad job explaining that... I'll probably ...

Oh... Um... Lots of mistakes here, I see! The bit about not killing them is weird depending on how you look at it. I always figured it would be easier ...