Ventomology

Thank you! I'll fix up those points ASAP!

Oh wow! You're so nice about everything! Let's see... I'll follow you, that way the next one will pop up on my 'people' feed. Catch ya later!

I do detail the golden bird in a later scene. We haven't actually seen it yet, so I didn't describe it. I'll see what I can do about the setting ...

Thanks for pointing those out! (And thank you for realizing this was set in the Victorian era. I was going for that.)

Oh wow... I can't believe I didn't catch those mistakes! Thanks a bunch! And I do have my reasons on the fox, so... Thanks again!

Hey! Nice to see you again! I guess I should go into the era a little more shouldn't I? I'll see if I can work that in without it feeling ...

Whoops! I never heard of the word either, and just thought you meant ebony. Sorry 'bout that.

I went back and fixed the awkward bits that you caught. Thanks so much for reading this!

Hey no need to thank me! Often times reading other people's work helps me remember all the tools I forgot to use in my own work. But... Thanks all the ...

Thanks!

Thanks! I actually don't write much poetry; it was more of a thing that popped into my head and made me laugh. But now that you mention it, I'll probably ...

I'm working on it right now! Thanks!

Um... most of that was on purpose, but thanks! Also, I guess my being a musician doesn't warrant the right to use musical terms, huh? Thanks for pointing that out!

*laughs evilly* I can't tell you that! And thanks for reading!

Thanks! I'll definitely fix those points you mentioned. I only hope the coming chapters can meet expectations...