Ventomology

Hey! Nice to see you again! I guess I should go into the era a little more shouldn't I? I'll see if I can work that in without it feeling ...

Whoops! I never heard of the word either, and just thought you meant ebony. Sorry 'bout that.

I went back and fixed the awkward bits that you caught. Thanks so much for reading this!

Hey no need to thank me! Often times reading other people's work helps me remember all the tools I forgot to use in my own work. But... Thanks all the ...

Thanks!

Thanks! I actually don't write much poetry; it was more of a thing that popped into my head and made me laugh. But now that you mention it, I'll probably ...

I'm working on it right now! Thanks!

Um... most of that was on purpose, but thanks! Also, I guess my being a musician doesn't warrant the right to use musical terms, huh? Thanks for pointing that out!

*laughs evilly* I can't tell you that! And thanks for reading!

Thanks! I'll definitely fix those points you mentioned. I only hope the coming chapters can meet expectations...

Heh... I actually started this one to work on a problem I ran in to with my first piece of not adding enough detail! Looks like there's still a lot ...

Thank YOU! This is definitely a piece I plan on finishing.

Yeah, some of those wordings are awkward, but I'll fix them. Thanks for reviewing me!

Ah, okay. But I'd try posting sections of about 1000-1500 words. That's the length I use, it has been successful for me.

I'm willing to bet that most of the people on YWS don't use text language all that often-including me! But I think you did a good job anyway. (Certainly better ...