Ventomology

Ooh, you're good, Iggy. You're almost spot on with all the magic-ey stuff. Anyways, thanks a bunch for reading this!

Ah, I called it 'Simon's challenge' because he originally predicted it would happen. But I guess that's a confusing way of putting it... Hmmm Thanks for pointing that out!

Ack! Poor Lady Avondale. Thanks for pointing out her lack of appearance. And I'll get to that marble bit there. Thanks again!

Oh. Thanks for catching those grammar errors!

WOW. I'll have to check back on the Count's thing there, definitely. (Thanks for pointing that out.) And I guess the characters' appearances do need some reinforcement. I so need ...

Oh my goodness... Did I never get back to you on this review? I feel kind of rude. I'll check back for those things you pointed out. Thanks!

Yay! Thanks a ton for reading through this. I know jumping into the ninth chapter of a novel can be confusing...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the characters-I just hope I kept them as strong in the later chapters... Happy Review Day!

Ah, I see.

Oh, the hyperbole is making me swoon! Don't keep me waiting on week 4. Ciao!

Thanks a ton! I've had problems with those icky-flowing sentences before, so I'll be sure to keep an eye out for them.

Thanks!

Thanks! (I hate to be rude, or to look a gift horse in the mouth, but you misspelled 'punctuation'.)

Um... Fragments are often used to accentuate a feeling or idea. Thanks for pointing everything else out though! (And sorry I got to you late.)

Thanks, Cricket! (What do you mean favor? Did I review something of yours?) And sorry I'm late. I was on vacation with family.