Ventomology

Yo! Sorry I couldn't review this week. Uh, I'm just going to leave a comment 'cause I have like... three things maybe? One: Is all of that passive voice on ...

He only pretends he's not. In one of the earlier chapters, Braxton tries to save his older brother from an enchanted inn. He kind of fails. Also... it's in the ...

I shall fix those bits right away. Since this is for Tenyo's contest, I'll actually have a chapter up every week, so that will hopefully make you happy. Thanks again!

(laughs evilly) You shall see the colors come into play later. And wow, I don't know how to thank you! I've met very few people who can read through all ...

Thanks, Losty! And by the way, Braxton is the second prince.

Thanks! And... as for the title, it is what it is because the story is loosely based on the fairy tale "The Golden Bird". I wonder what a better name ...

Ooh, you're good, Iggy. You're almost spot on with all the magic-ey stuff. Anyways, thanks a bunch for reading this!

Ah, I called it 'Simon's challenge' because he originally predicted it would happen. But I guess that's a confusing way of putting it... Hmmm Thanks for pointing that out!

Ack! Poor Lady Avondale. Thanks for pointing out her lack of appearance. And I'll get to that marble bit there. Thanks again!

Oh. Thanks for catching those grammar errors!

WOW. I'll have to check back on the Count's thing there, definitely. (Thanks for pointing that out.) And I guess the characters' appearances do need some reinforcement. I so need ...

Oh my goodness... Did I never get back to you on this review? I feel kind of rude. I'll check back for those things you pointed out. Thanks!

Yay! Thanks a ton for reading through this. I know jumping into the ninth chapter of a novel can be confusing...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the characters-I just hope I kept them as strong in the later chapters... Happy Review Day!

Ah, I see.