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It's probably not Dutch... Is it Swedish or Norwegian?

Since anything that looks remotely German always intrigues me, what was that second language you used here?

Great job! I think Timmy and Wolf got most of the bases covered, so I don't have anything new for you. *cries* Anyway, keep on writing!

Alrighty, here as requested to assist with grammar! So, before I start, let me ask the huge question: Did anyone read this aloud word for word? That's the BEST way ...

I was going to review, but then I read everything and was like... what do I say? It's very good! And since I seem to be awful at finding this ...

Ugh... I really need to read The Book Thief. I'll fix that little nitpicky thing there right away, and thanks again for reviewing me!

Yeah... I'm gonna fix that 'said/asked' thing now. Thanks for reviewing me again!

Thanks a lot! I'm getting a lot the 'go back and read' comment, so clearly I'm doing something right. And I'll fix those mistakes right away. Thanks again!

Ack! Mistakes! I shall fix those right away. Thanks for the review!

Ah, you're a fellow knight! Thank you very much, Knight Celestia.

Yay, thanks! And I shall try to find this book you've mentioned. It sounds amazing.

I was going to leave a review, and then I read that anaconda down there and realized Pies had picked out practically everything. Soo... good job mostly.

I wasn't expecting a review on chapter 1, but thanks a lot!

Aww, thanks!

Yo, Pinkie! Thanks for the review! (And don't worry: I think I've gotten more description into the later chapters.)