Ventomology

Aww, thanks!

I'll fix some of those points you illustrated. Thanks a lot for the review!

Yeah... bloody stuff-not my thing. Hopefully there won't be a challenge on it. I will fix that nitpick, and probably check out Pomp's piece. I want to see this sassy ...

Is it Danish?

Oh... I see what you did there.

It's probably not Dutch... Is it Swedish or Norwegian?

Since anything that looks remotely German always intrigues me, what was that second language you used here?

Great job! I think Timmy and Wolf got most of the bases covered, so I don't have anything new for you. *cries* Anyway, keep on writing!

Alrighty, here as requested to assist with grammar! So, before I start, let me ask the huge question: Did anyone read this aloud word for word? That's the BEST way ...

I was going to review, but then I read everything and was like... what do I say? It's very good! And since I seem to be awful at finding this ...

Ugh... I really need to read The Book Thief. I'll fix that little nitpicky thing there right away, and thanks again for reviewing me!

Yeah... I'm gonna fix that 'said/asked' thing now. Thanks for reviewing me again!

Thanks a lot! I'm getting a lot the 'go back and read' comment, so clearly I'm doing something right. And I'll fix those mistakes right away. Thanks again!

Ack! Mistakes! I shall fix those right away. Thanks for the review!

Ah, you're a fellow knight! Thank you very much, Knight Celestia.