Ventomology

Yeah... I'm gonna fix that 'said/asked' thing now. Thanks for reviewing me again!

Thanks a lot! I'm getting a lot the 'go back and read' comment, so clearly I'm doing something right. And I'll fix those mistakes right away. Thanks again!

Ack! Mistakes! I shall fix those right away. Thanks for the review!

Ah, you're a fellow knight! Thank you very much, Knight Celestia.

Yay, thanks! And I shall try to find this book you've mentioned. It sounds amazing.

I was going to leave a review, and then I read that anaconda down there and realized Pies had picked out practically everything. Soo... good job mostly.

I wasn't expecting a review on chapter 1, but thanks a lot!

Aww, thanks!

Yo, Pinkie! Thanks for the review! (And don't worry: I think I've gotten more description into the later chapters.)

You're precisely right!

My one and only comment today is to not always start a paragraph of dialogue with quotation marks. It's mostly an aesthetics thing, and makes the work look better, as ...

ACK! A typo! I shall fix that right away. As for the second note, that was explained in an earlier chapter. Thanks for the review! I'm really glad someone's reading ...

Hiya! I only have one little comment for you today, so no actual reviewing. Anyways, I believe that in the second scene, while you had good action, you might want ...

Nope, not really.

Yeah. Precisely.