Ventomology

Thanks for the review!

Did I execute the death well? I've never actually killed someone in a novel before. Thanks for the review, by the way!

Hey! I noticed that you've gone through ALL of my chapters so far, which is like... whoa. So, I'm going to fix things up as they come and I probably ...

Ah, by put them back, she meant back into the viewing configuration-or-whatever-it's-called. That was probably confusing... I'll fix that.

Uh, you forget that I was knocked out almost immediately in the Hunger Games. I will see to your nitpicks right away, and thank you!

Wow... that's a lot of nitpicks. I'll see to them. Thanks a ton!

Whoa... Great review. I'll see to those nitpicks right away! Thanks a ton!

Ah... I've posted all of the chapters I've written so far. They might be hard to find though. As for the pages, they are like knights in training, not as ...

Yeah... I probably need some more character description reminders scattered around. Thanks a lot for the review!

The one with Elayna is actually pretty smooth already. She's still on the mind when you switch, so it's not as sudden as the Jonnie/Allan one.

Ack! Thank you, Kayfortnight! (Maybe I should have looked that up...)

I want to make a joke about your ability to flatter, but that would be out of place... Thanks so much!

ACK! So many errors! I must have been half-asleep or something. I am so sorry you had to find those... They should be fixed now. And thanks so much for ...

Oh, I love puns! I've gotten to most of those points by now... so onto the next one! Thanks as always!

Ah... and to think I just corrected someone the other day for their overuse of replacement nouns! *cries* Anywho, I will get to these nitpicks right away. Also, the part ...