Ventomology

Whoa... Great review. I'll see to those nitpicks right away! Thanks a ton!

Ah... I've posted all of the chapters I've written so far. They might be hard to find though. As for the pages, they are like knights in training, not as ...

Yeah... I probably need some more character description reminders scattered around. Thanks a lot for the review!

The one with Elayna is actually pretty smooth already. She's still on the mind when you switch, so it's not as sudden as the Jonnie/Allan one.

Ack! Thank you, Kayfortnight! (Maybe I should have looked that up...)

I want to make a joke about your ability to flatter, but that would be out of place... Thanks so much!

ACK! So many errors! I must have been half-asleep or something. I am so sorry you had to find those... They should be fixed now. And thanks so much for ...

Oh, I love puns! I've gotten to most of those points by now... so onto the next one! Thanks as always!

Ah... and to think I just corrected someone the other day for their overuse of replacement nouns! *cries* Anywho, I will get to these nitpicks right away. Also, the part ...

You could do the three asterisks, or some kind of objectively written lead-in. Either way works. But for sake of consistency, it'd be better to write something in rather than ...

Ugh... I hate the preposition rule. Even if it's correct, it makes the writing seem a little stiff. I'll see what I can do about that one. As for the ...

Ah... I chose to ignore Ferrell and the inn. It would have been really boring. I will look into those nitpicks you pointed out! Thanks so much!

*cackles evilly* I have very terrible things planned out for everyone. And rest assured, you shall hate Ferrell even more. Anyways, thanks so much for catching that typo! (I can't ...

I was avoiding the dialogue because it would have all been just 'filler' stuff, and because Rudi wouldn't really listen anyway... Anyways, I will definitely use 'sleuthing', and I'll fix ...

Eh... yes. You will see why the golden bird is important. That's actually the part I've just started writing! As for all your word replacements: thank you so much! I ...