Ventomology

Aww, thank you so much, Silver! (By the way, the vendetta against blondes is actually really important.) Hopefully you'll like the other characters just as much, because there are a ...

Shame I didn't catch those errors sooner. Also, there is a rule which states that we require commas between two adjectives which describe the same thing and affect each other. ...

Ah... maybe I should've put it under mystery/suspense then? Honestly, the actions scenes are few and far between, but I feel like the mystery isn't really explicit enough for the ...

Hehehe... we're going to have some hardcore action in 1.7 :)

Oh! I'm sorry I didn't catch that you'd reviewed another chapter! I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks a bunch!

Oh, don't worry. The next two chapters contain some interesting developments. :) Thanks for reviewing!

1. WHY ARE YOU STILL AWAKE HUNTER 2. Minerva and Aiden are going to battle, aren't they? That's going to be an exciting read. thumbs-up

Alas, the new man will not last long, for reasons you can probably guess by now. I will check up on the hood line, since it looks funny to me ...

Thank you for the nitpicks! I'll get on those.

Alas, the following chapters are not nearly as pretty as this one. Divinity does have a reason for speaking the way she does, I just haven't gotten there yet. Thanks ...

No worries! You can do it, Hunter!

Yeah... I'm not too happy with how this chapter ended either, but I had like an hour to write it, and I only barely got it in. Oops. Thanks for ...

It wasn't even an Agni Kai to begin with, Hunter. It was more like Fire-Bending master schools young Earth-Bender. Thanks for the review!

Please. Just because I haven't reviewed your chapter yet, doesn't mean I haven't read it.

HUNTER I LEAVE IN ONE HOUR. I don't have time for an Agni Kai! Also, do you not ride public transportation very often? The other person who commented on the ...