Ventomology

Er... It was not referring to height? Should I have used a hyphen, since the adjective is "high school?"

Basically, I am itching to know their stories. I was an evil reporter lady last year (though now I just KO boys with my trombone).

I reread the paragraph you picked out, but I don't think either of those nitpicks were wrong. Sorry! 1. Ah, I am purposely not calling my chapters chapters . With ...

Uh... I don't actually know. I did that a while ago. I think Microsoft Word will do it automatically, and Google Docs lets you change settings on autocorrect, but I'm ...

Sometimes I forget that I need to remind people that Mellie wears armor. Oops. Thanks for the review!

Aww, thank you so much, Silver! (By the way, the vendetta against blondes is actually really important.) Hopefully you'll like the other characters just as much, because there are a ...

Shame I didn't catch those errors sooner. Also, there is a rule which states that we require commas between two adjectives which describe the same thing and affect each other. ...

Ah... maybe I should've put it under mystery/suspense then? Honestly, the actions scenes are few and far between, but I feel like the mystery isn't really explicit enough for the ...

Hehehe... we're going to have some hardcore action in 1.7 :)

Oh! I'm sorry I didn't catch that you'd reviewed another chapter! I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks a bunch!

Oh, don't worry. The next two chapters contain some interesting developments. :) Thanks for reviewing!

1. WHY ARE YOU STILL AWAKE HUNTER 2. Minerva and Aiden are going to battle, aren't they? That's going to be an exciting read. thumbs-up

Alas, the new man will not last long, for reasons you can probably guess by now. I will check up on the hood line, since it looks funny to me ...

Thank you for the nitpicks! I'll get on those.

Alas, the following chapters are not nearly as pretty as this one. Divinity does have a reason for speaking the way she does, I just haven't gotten there yet. Thanks ...