Ventomology

Yeah... this chapter wasn't one of my favorites. I'm glad you found the premise surprising though! Thanks for the review! (And also for the comments on my picture book. :) ...

Yeah, it counts as the review-each-chapter thing. You just aren't getting the points you deserve. And I'm glad you liked Mr. Pyus. He'll be offering a lot more sage advice ...

I'm glad you found the last line interesting! And in answer to your question, Public Bus does follow a pretty wide selection of characters. Divinity & co. probably show up ...

Hello! Sorry about being very slow to respond. I was totally not squealing over the fact that the famous BlueAfrica reviewed my work Um, I know you half-retracted your statement ...

Er... It was not referring to height? Should I have used a hyphen, since the adjective is "high school?"

Basically, I am itching to know their stories. I was an evil reporter lady last year (though now I just KO boys with my trombone).

I reread the paragraph you picked out, but I don't think either of those nitpicks were wrong. Sorry! 1. Ah, I am purposely not calling my chapters chapters . With ...

Uh... I don't actually know. I did that a while ago. I think Microsoft Word will do it automatically, and Google Docs lets you change settings on autocorrect, but I'm ...

Sometimes I forget that I need to remind people that Mellie wears armor. Oops. Thanks for the review!

Aww, thank you so much, Silver! (By the way, the vendetta against blondes is actually really important.) Hopefully you'll like the other characters just as much, because there are a ...

Shame I didn't catch those errors sooner. Also, there is a rule which states that we require commas between two adjectives which describe the same thing and affect each other. ...

Ah... maybe I should've put it under mystery/suspense then? Honestly, the actions scenes are few and far between, but I feel like the mystery isn't really explicit enough for the ...

Hehehe... we're going to have some hardcore action in 1.7 :)

Oh! I'm sorry I didn't catch that you'd reviewed another chapter! I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks a bunch!

Oh, don't worry. The next two chapters contain some interesting developments. :) Thanks for reviewing!