Ventomology

Ah, when people ask what will happen next in this piece, I feel so guilty. It can take a few chapters to return to a particular thread of the storyline. ...

I checked and changed the nitpicks you pointed out. I'm glad you enjoyed the style too! Thanks for the review!

It's nice to hear from you again! Mr. Stevenson and Mellie are cops, yes. I'll keep your suggestion about giving some history to Mellie's armor in mind too. Thanks for ...

I have fixed both notes. 'Smoothen' is apparently not a word, but I think you were still right about just 'smooth' being wrong. Also, I thought dragons were known for ...

You should give me some of your luck, Hunter, because I am constantly getting papercuts. (And cuts from the trigger key on my trombone, and sewing pins, and literally everything ...

Actually, Hunter, your grammar note is a hotly debated subject. Some people prefer to leave out the extra 's' for anything ending in 's', and some of us only omit ...

Yeah, I should definitely get rid of all the redundancy. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the characters.

Ack! I can't believe I made that mistake at the end there! Thank you very much for reviewing my work.

I will look into and correct those items you pointed out. As for the Desert Dust, I'm glad it stood out. Thanks for the review!

Eum... this was my infodump chapter, so it really would be difficult to jump in and read. I applaud your bravery. I like your take on Willow and Drake though. ...

You explanation does clear things up a bit, but I still think a bit of Darren's internal commentary would help. Besides, I'm sure he's sassier in his head, and that ...

Yeah... this chapter wasn't one of my favorites. I'm glad you found the premise surprising though! Thanks for the review! (And also for the comments on my picture book. :) ...

Yeah, it counts as the review-each-chapter thing. You just aren't getting the points you deserve. And I'm glad you liked Mr. Pyus. He'll be offering a lot more sage advice ...

I'm glad you found the last line interesting! And in answer to your question, Public Bus does follow a pretty wide selection of characters. Divinity & co. probably show up ...

Hello! Sorry about being very slow to respond. I was totally not squealing over the fact that the famous BlueAfrica reviewed my work Um, I know you half-retracted your statement ...