Ventomology

Actually, Hunter, your grammar note is a hotly debated subject. Some people prefer to leave out the extra 's' for anything ending in 's', and some of us only omit ...

Yeah, I should definitely get rid of all the redundancy. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the characters.

Ack! I can't believe I made that mistake at the end there! Thank you very much for reviewing my work.

I will look into and correct those items you pointed out. As for the Desert Dust, I'm glad it stood out. Thanks for the review!

Eum... this was my infodump chapter, so it really would be difficult to jump in and read. I applaud your bravery. I like your take on Willow and Drake though. ...

You explanation does clear things up a bit, but I still think a bit of Darren's internal commentary would help. Besides, I'm sure he's sassier in his head, and that ...

Yeah... this chapter wasn't one of my favorites. I'm glad you found the premise surprising though! Thanks for the review! (And also for the comments on my picture book. :) ...

Yeah, it counts as the review-each-chapter thing. You just aren't getting the points you deserve. And I'm glad you liked Mr. Pyus. He'll be offering a lot more sage advice ...

I'm glad you found the last line interesting! And in answer to your question, Public Bus does follow a pretty wide selection of characters. Divinity & co. probably show up ...

Hello! Sorry about being very slow to respond. I was totally not squealing over the fact that the famous BlueAfrica reviewed my work Um, I know you half-retracted your statement ...

Er... It was not referring to height? Should I have used a hyphen, since the adjective is "high school?"

Basically, I am itching to know their stories. I was an evil reporter lady last year (though now I just KO boys with my trombone).

I reread the paragraph you picked out, but I don't think either of those nitpicks were wrong. Sorry! 1. Ah, I am purposely not calling my chapters chapters . With ...

Uh... I don't actually know. I did that a while ago. I think Microsoft Word will do it automatically, and Google Docs lets you change settings on autocorrect, but I'm ...

Sometimes I forget that I need to remind people that Mellie wears armor. Oops. Thanks for the review!