Ventomology

I would use the magic excuse, but when I think about it, the feather thing probably can be interpreted both ways and still be fairly accurate. This scene is being ...

1. You know, my dad is actually very good at telling different ethnic groups of Asians apart. It's kind of interesting, especially since he's my white parent. Did I tell ...

You'd be surprised at how much weirdness goes unnoticed on a busy bus or subway. As for Divinity's request to play in the snow, I'm fairly sure it's been mentioned ...

Haha! I worked on the school newspaper last year, and believe me, that ink gets around. I'll fix the dialogue thing when I'm not dying from stress, and sorry for ...

Hmm... I will find some way to fix that night vision thing. You learn new things, eh? As for point three, I have a challenge for you. Look up the ...

I like to think that Martin has always had grace in him, but he didn't want to embrace it. Besides, he does pull on Divinity's hair at the end, and ...

Haha! This week's chapter is basically the explanation-overload, which is poor planning on my part, but it needed to be done. Anyways, I've fixed the first two notes, but it ...

Oh, but Hunter, I have switched perspectives mid-chapter before. I even went full omniscient in a few cases. As for point 5, I am glad you picked up on the ...

Ugh... I can't believe I made all those gross mistakes. Thanks for catching them!

I fixed your note and the thing about Willow's question. The uselessness thing was really Willow's opinion slipping into the narration, though it seems I didn't get that across. Thanks!

Oh hohohoho! You shall see, Hunter! Also, I am glad to know that all my time spent in Taiwanese night markets has not gone to waste. Thanks!

Fixing the typos now... Thanks as always! (Also, you will get your wish on Martin's turning. :) )

Willow is easily upset, and it's one of her flaws, really. I feel that all characters need both flaws and strong points. Also, despite the fact that powerful folk are ...

Note 1: Oops. I must have forgotten to mention that Mr. Pyus is the only passenger on board. I'll fix that immediately. As for Impression 1... well, you'll just have ...

Yay! I did well! By the way, Julie Andrews is a famous movie star who played a lot of singing roles for young women. She's a household name in the ...