Ventomology

I got her in the previous chapter, yes, which was 1.01. This is a rather confusing way of numbering chapters, but I committed to it already, and there's no going ...

I actually try to avoid concluding sentences that are both dramatized and generalized. They make me feel cheesy. I will, however, put a bit more effort into the character descriptions. ...

As of June 26, this chapter has been edited to fit with the rest of the coming chapter.

You may already be there, but please be aware that I am rewriting 3.21 currently, because I was unsatisfied with how it fit into the storyline. It's still up for ...

"Ponderous" means heavy. It's an SAT word, which is probably why you suspected it wasn't real (those SAT words sound terribly silly, and I'm not sure who even uses them). ...

I think a number of these either have precedents or context already set up in earlier chapters. Sorry it's not all that clear! Thanks for the review, and happy review ...

Both points are fixed! I'd been wanting to take out the auditory thing for a while, but never got around to it, apparently.

Peanut butter is actually used for working gum out of hair, yes! And like always, I'm using knowledge I incorrectly assume people already know. I need to stop relying on ...

Staying on the phone... that's an excellent point. I think I'm going to change one of Drake's lines to work that in. Thanks for sticking with me! Happy Review Day!

Sometimes I forget that not everyone rides public transportation. Buses follow a strict route and schedule, so even if no one is on the bus, they still run along the ...

Wow, I don't think I've ever gotten a comment about long sentences before. The change you're suggesting would alter the way this sentence is meant to be read, but I'll ...

Pssh. I've scrapped stories too. It's no biggie. Thanks for letting me know!

This entire chapter is kind of a mess, but it's nice to hear new comments! (And also get comments from someone who also knows the same lore.) Sorry I didn't ...

I have checked up on those little fixes. My own summer vacation starts tomorrow, so I should be catching up with your chapters soon. They're bookmarked and everything. Thanks for ...

Cameos would be pretty smart. I really should have thought of that. Also, I will try to describe more of the bus's interior. Hopefully that will flow better than describing ...