Ventomology

Haha hopefully many things are cleared up in chapter 2! I have a pretty hefty backlog-just doing editing before I post. And I'm so glad you like Kyle! I think ...

Haha why do I have the sinking feeling that earring will be important.

Love the description of Cyrin with the ring on

If Shane is going to continue to have thoughts about architecture I am going to have a whole architectural history discussion in these comments I will have you know.

...all of the kids are cities. Also, if Nova Scotia was shortened to Nova... is there someone walking around who goes by 'British?'

THEY ARE ALL NAMED AFTER PLACES IN CANADA IM WHEEZING

I am UNSUPERVISED. >: D

Honestly good on your for chugging along. I always end up restarting and getting nowhere lol.

Messenger I am SO BAD at continuity. But I'll try lol.

Hi Lim!!! Thank you so much for all the reviews. I have... been in my own hidey-hole because the next chapters are kicking my butt. But it always makes my ...

Heyy! Thank you so much! Yeah... this is really the chapter that I think I didn't quite know what to do with, and I probably could have gotten my goal ...

Haha I have actually had chapter 5 written for ages but -5 is giving me some real trouble. Hopefully I can get them up soon!!

Yesss Clandestine. Fight your oppressors. Also I'm so in love with the fact that she loses here actually. Like, from a narrative perspective. I didn't want her to lose. It ...

Awesome action, but can I just say, this chapter title is pure gold.

Theo is best boy honestly. And thank youuuuuu!