Ventomology

No worries! Being sick isn't very fun. And I really want to respond to your comments, but no spoilers. Sorry! Thanks so much!

Haha the crew that Focci mentioned is in fact, Tejal's adoptive parents. I should probably clear that up when they show up again. Thanks as always! I think things will ...

I feel like Ellipse probably tends to switch languages when she's talking to the boys. That should be something for me to clarify in all the chapters, not just this ...

Honestly, it might be a mixture of both on why this particular future chapter is clearer. The others delved less into the action and dialogue, and before this part, I ...

Ah, so it's like eating dessert first. That's a fun way to start the whole novel!

Tbh I came up with the name 'tubai' because I had been reading my urban geography textbook in advance this summer, and Dubai was mentioned several times in it. Thanks ...

Ahh, you're right that I haven't really been keeping up with the suspense. I'm probably stretching myself thin with all the different kinds of plots going around. But now that ...

Hey sorry I never got back to you! I must have looked over it the last time checked my notifications. Thanks for the review!

God I want to spoil some things for you. I won't though, because then when I reveal it you'll feel silly and I'll be very smug. Thanks for pointing out ...

Tbh I skimped out on the interactions with the bounty hunters because my parents visited this weekend and I needed to be done writing. I'll have to lengthen it at ...

I know fanny is a synonym for butt, but fanny packs are a different ballgame. You're right that Focci getting angry in that last chapter was out of character. I'll ...

Thanks!

I'd have to do some serious editing before I published any of my stuff, but if I do publish I'll let you know. And you're right that there hasn't been ...

My bathroom humor is sophisticated . Yeah, Max and Ami are the other specifus from the Impending . I admit that I didn't do a good job recapping that here. ...

Lucky for you, I actually have a visit to Sirena planned out. You will 100% get to meet Focci's family. Thanks again! I promise I'll get to 4.5 today. I ...