Ventomology

You didn't tell me in the chat that you reviewed! Nonetheless, thanks so much. There are more feels next week, so maybe put that one off until you're all done ...

My roommate said I looked really pained while writing this, and guess what there's more feels next week.

Man, I always feel silly when people point out my grammatical errors. I'll fix that once I'm at the computer. But I'm glad you liked this chapter!

Haha, this is actually sci-fi, if you check the tags at the top. But I'm glad you like it! Admittedly, I don't often have a chance to completely check through ...

Ah, it's nice to get new eyes on this. I hadn't realized I was getting lazy with the dialogue. Thanks so much!

No worries! Being sick isn't very fun. And I really want to respond to your comments, but no spoilers. Sorry! Thanks so much!

Haha the crew that Focci mentioned is in fact, Tejal's adoptive parents. I should probably clear that up when they show up again. Thanks as always! I think things will ...

I feel like Ellipse probably tends to switch languages when she's talking to the boys. That should be something for me to clarify in all the chapters, not just this ...

Honestly, it might be a mixture of both on why this particular future chapter is clearer. The others delved less into the action and dialogue, and before this part, I ...

Ah, so it's like eating dessert first. That's a fun way to start the whole novel!

Tbh I came up with the name 'tubai' because I had been reading my urban geography textbook in advance this summer, and Dubai was mentioned several times in it. Thanks ...

Ahh, you're right that I haven't really been keeping up with the suspense. I'm probably stretching myself thin with all the different kinds of plots going around. But now that ...

Hey sorry I never got back to you! I must have looked over it the last time checked my notifications. Thanks for the review!

God I want to spoil some things for you. I won't though, because then when I reveal it you'll feel silly and I'll be very smug. Thanks for pointing out ...

Tbh I skimped out on the interactions with the bounty hunters because my parents visited this weekend and I needed to be done writing. I'll have to lengthen it at ...