Ventomology

... gotta love stupid mistakes. And remember that it's Spec Corp that's after the specifus. Although I guess if you've forgotten, then I haven't done a good job of reminding ...

Oh, yay! I was wondering if it was weird that everyone was friends now, but I hadn't done any big moments for it. Thanks so much!

Hey, sorry I'm so slow to reply sometimes! College is... a lot. Anyways, there actually aren't a lot of different bounty hunters that Ellipse and co. have run into? I ...

I'm relatively certain you'll like the next chapter too. ; ) Thanks as always!

Thanks! I want to reply to more things, but no spoilers!

You know, I was just doing bathrooms to be obnoxious, but now that you point it out, it is a pretty handy way to bring in Ellipse's old job experience. ...

Haha thanks!

That door sentence is weird. I'll have to fix that. And hopefully I can meet your expectations on the next chapter!

Haha no worries! I totally get that first drafts (and even seconds and thirds) can be a little thrown-together!

I forgot to pull that line out flip . It should be gone now though. Thanks again! And yes, raise your eyebrows at that first line you picked out. : ...

Uhh... I'm just going to respond to everything at once? I've actually tried a couple of different ways of denoting the interludes. What I'd like to do is actually change ...

Hmmm... I was thinking "missing person" more along the amber-alert/missing child train of thought, but I can see how that would be misleading. I'll think of a way to rephrase ...

Ahh wow I didn't realize I had stuck one of these interludes in so early. If you check the very bottom of the chapter, that may lend a few clues ...

Ahh wow I didn't realize I had stuck one of these interludes in so early. If you check the very bottom of the chapter, that may lend a few clues ...

Yikes that was a slip holy flip. Thanks for catching that. I have fixed it. Also sorry I never responded to the last review! I was a little caught up ...