Ventomology

I think partially I just could never get my settled in one direction as far as the legal stuff goes. Plus I... don't know much about law... and research on ...

Ah, no, she's still under 18 through this. It was heavily implied though that Andra-Media has guardianship of her in addition to being her employer, or at least that's how ...

Let us say I was inspired by Kesha and leave it there.

Yeeess. I did my job well. Plot-completeness-wise it's basically all downhill from here. Except maybe the last chapter. Thanks!

Mmm, self-reporting would be good. Maybe I should have played up a bit more isolation regarding signals in and out of the Andra-Media satellite? Like, there was the money obviously, ...

Ahh, yeah. I really wanted Andra to finish this story as a positive force in Ellipse's life, so even if it doesn't help the plot a lot, I wanted this ...

@BlueAfrica, @TheSilverFox, and @BiscuitsLeGuin. I promise all chapters will be up before I leave town. ; )

Yaaay. I'm dying. : D

JUST 7 MORE CHAPTERS before you find out who the person at the end is. : D

Ooh, I was thinking I'd have to remove that never-existing line, but you just brought that back really well. That might be a thing to do more of in draft ...

Ugh yeah. The LMS blizzard is killing me, and I was hardcore studying for finals while I wrote last week. I just got home yesterday after finishing up with school ...

Haha yeah there is a lot wrong with this chapter. Getting into and out of action scenes is so hard...

Multiple chapters per week until we hit chapter 73! We're all about to die. : D

Thanks! I guess the implication that there hasn't been in-person contact since they handed her in should be made more explicit. I'm just not sure where I should put it, ...

You got to this before I could fix it by adding the except not at the end ahhh. Thanks as usual of course! I think there are... six chapters after ...