Ventomology

Haha yeah there is a lot wrong with this chapter. Getting into and out of action scenes is so hard...

Multiple chapters per week until we hit chapter 73! We're all about to die. : D

Thanks! I guess the implication that there hasn't been in-person contact since they handed her in should be made more explicit. I'm just not sure where I should put it, ...

You got to this before I could fix it by adding the except not at the end ahhh. Thanks as usual of course! I think there are... six chapters after ...

That is a long piece of description. Do you think I could just skip it? No one really goes in the Ink again aside from maybe stuff in Tejal's book.

Yeah I usually go for the dashes as well. Maybe I was feeling lazy and didn't want to go through the trouble of inserting the character oops. Also thank you ...

Truly, I do not bring up Independent Titan enough. Information pacing is so hard ugh.

Haha sorry. It's weird, like suddenly I have the technical language to talk about architecture and I can't stop. I get that it might be sort of alienating though.

Ooh, that placement tip is pretty helpful. I tend to break the big moments--Fox has mentioned this to me as well--for the purpose of cliff-hanging, but I can see how ...

Ahhh, the Arts and Crafts thing is definitely my major at uni showing. Sorry! It's an architectural/design movement from the early 1900s. I unfortunately slip into that a lot in ...

Muhahahaha. You remember what I said about dogfights?

It's okay if you just have double spaces between stanzas! It might not look as pretty, but people will get the intention. At least, if that was the meaning behind ...

AHAHA. Alas I can't tell you anything. Also I may have just really wanted to write one last action scene for finality's sake.

HECK YEA!!!!

Oh I hope your finals were okay!! And don't worry. I think you'll have most of what you've been looking for when you do get to 63. : D