Ventomology

Ahh, yeah. I really wanted Andra to finish this story as a positive force in Ellipse's life, so even if it doesn't help the plot a lot, I wanted this ...

@BlueAfrica, @TheSilverFox, and @BiscuitsLeGuin. I promise all chapters will be up before I leave town. ; )

Yaaay. I'm dying. : D

JUST 7 MORE CHAPTERS before you find out who the person at the end is. : D

Ooh, I was thinking I'd have to remove that never-existing line, but you just brought that back really well. That might be a thing to do more of in draft ...

Ugh yeah. The LMS blizzard is killing me, and I was hardcore studying for finals while I wrote last week. I just got home yesterday after finishing up with school ...

Haha yeah there is a lot wrong with this chapter. Getting into and out of action scenes is so hard...

Multiple chapters per week until we hit chapter 73! We're all about to die. : D

Thanks! I guess the implication that there hasn't been in-person contact since they handed her in should be made more explicit. I'm just not sure where I should put it, ...

You got to this before I could fix it by adding the except not at the end ahhh. Thanks as usual of course! I think there are... six chapters after ...

That is a long piece of description. Do you think I could just skip it? No one really goes in the Ink again aside from maybe stuff in Tejal's book.

Yeah I usually go for the dashes as well. Maybe I was feeling lazy and didn't want to go through the trouble of inserting the character oops. Also thank you ...

Truly, I do not bring up Independent Titan enough. Information pacing is so hard ugh.

Haha sorry. It's weird, like suddenly I have the technical language to talk about architecture and I can't stop. I get that it might be sort of alienating though.

Ooh, that placement tip is pretty helpful. I tend to break the big moments--Fox has mentioned this to me as well--for the purpose of cliff-hanging, but I can see how ...