Ventomology

Yay! You're back! Oh, how I missed you! Okay, now I'm just being melodramatic. Onto the review! Anyway, this is just a personal opinion, but there are way too many ...

Yo! I believe I caught you in chat yesterday, no? Anyway, welcome to YWS! By the way, I will likely come off as harsh. You have now been warned. First: ...

Yay! I don't have to be mad at you for not posting until like... midnight. Anyway: nitpicks first. "Kalan and she got into an argument again," Okay, if the 'she' ...

Finally, you slacker! Anywho, onwards with the review! First, some nitpicks: "I no d my head, and he lets go." "It was if it had never happened." You are missing ...

I'm back! Yes, yes, I know I'm not being as prompt as usual. Now then, my nitpicks: “What?” he asked felling foolish. “When and where should we start again ? ...

The UC returns! Okay... first, my one nitpick: "keeping as muc has possibly packed up and using as little of it as they could" Several things are wrong here. And ...

Yo! I'm surprised a week 2 piece is still up here. Anyway, like Iggs said, the formatting of this piece is a little weird. Usually copy-and-paste works best when uploading ...

Yo! I'm back, Lost! Anywho, before I roll out the technical stuff, let's catch some nitpicks. With butterfly nets. "You kept me from being murdered and you must an arm ...

Heyo, Messenger! Anywho, before I get started, let's get rid of the nitpicks, shall we? "She cocked her arm back. " I ought to-“ Forgot a quotation mark! "He stepped ...

Woo! It's finally up! First thing though: isn't this chapter 3? Now then, here are some grammar/typo nitpicks for you first. "He accepted his awake-ness and clambered out of the ...

Alrighty then... Out of all the poems I've read, this is definitely something unique. Pun battles are some of the best things in the world, but you don't see poems ...

Heyo! Sorry I read part 3 before I did this one. Mistake on my part. Let's see... Pies probably caught all the sentence-ey things to talk about, so I guess ...

Heya! I'm back! Anywho, my only grammar comments are that the first two paragraphs, since they are both talking about the coming of the Soul Stealers, should probably only be ...

Yay! Hello there, official LMS contestant. Anyway, I found a typo somewhere in here. You misspelled 'servant' when Devon was talking about taking girls to his bed. There were also ...

HELLO! Very nice. I must say, this might be better than the last one. There is very little to complain about, just some trivial little things. First, why would a ...