Ventomology

Heya! I'm totally not like, a week late on this review. By the way, I sketched Kamikaz during my Environmental Sciences class (but then I started doodling concepts for my ...

I think this was the most amusing chapter so far. You cannot believe how many times I either snorted or giggled while reading. Uh, anyways, moving on. Note: I feel ...

Aha! You finally got this chapter somewhere official where I could review it. Thank you for remembering. :) Anyways, moving on. Note: YOUR FIRST PARAGRAPH HUNTER. I mentally cried when ...

UM CLAUD AND REYNA WHAT. BACKSTORIES, ENDER. MY JOURNALISM HABITS ARE KICKING IN. Anyways, I'm trying to decide if I should be surprised at this revelation. It crossed my mind, ...

I knew this was a romance, but I really wasn't expecting all the feelings and smooching to start up so quickly... Also, I did read your prologue! Like you said, ...

Review time! Note 1: Anticlimactic much? My one beef with a lot of action movies and other action things has always been the employment of anticlimaxes. While the choice is ...

And here I finally reach the latest installment. I'm loving all the factions, by the way. So! Review time! Note Sometimes, I feel like you skip steps in the action. ...

Ooh! Antagonists! Gotta love those antagonists. But uh... I'll gush about your plot later. Note: People's faces have lots of muscles, and lots of muscles are used to show emotion. ...

I have returned! (Also, I hope your review day is fabulous.) Shall we get on with the review? Note: Commas rule, but try not to splice them. Lav took out ...

Heya, Atsmai! This piece is for LMS II, right? I hope you've been enjoying the competition. Anyways, onto the review. Note: Try not to rush the action. You can take ...

Aha! I see what you did there! So it's diary entries scattered through the usual third-person limited, huh? This'll be fun! Note 1: Um... I'm not sure if you knew ...

Hey! I have come to review! Now then, let's get on with the review, shall we? Given the style you've set for the rest of this work, I feel slightly ...

Good day! It's very late (err, a month late), but welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here! Anyways, I'll move straight on to the review. Note 1: Pronouns ...

Hello there! It's been ages since I saw your work in the Green Room... I'm still a bit fuzzy on some of the plot points and names, even though I ...

I'm surprised this is still in the Green Room, Mister Sorcerer. I feel like someone would have caught it by now. Anyways, since I'm not sure what sorts of general ...