Ventomology

Hoo boy okay. My goal is to catch a chapter of this every day of August until I run out, so hopefully I'll be able to give better feedback in ...

Okie dokie let's finish up this chapter. 1. Maybe I'm just missing things, but I feel like the political intrigue surrounding the comtesse's poisoning and marriage isn't as clearly explained ...

Hello! Finally back. 1. For all that I complained about some deus ex machina in the last chapter from Isha's perspective, it is nice that everyone is in rest-mode at ...

Oh there are the feelings. I promise I did read chapter 25! It was a nice switch of perspectives, though Isha's rescue felt... a little bit deus ex machina? Maybe ...

Back again, and this time in a timely manner. 1. I loved that fight! Wow! It was well-paced, and well-fought, and just like, well-everything-ed? And it was also a realistic ...

OH SNAP I know I haven't been keeping up with the entire story but like. I feel like Gideon's reunion with Carter, was a high point in a very long ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this story!! Hopefully I can do better now that I'm settled in at my summer job. 1. Maybe you did ...

Hi, hello! First, congrats on all the progress you made during LMS! I wasn't able to keep up with it because of school, but I'll try to hit up the ...

Heya, First of all, like AlexNoelle said, absolutely heartbreaking poem. Presumably, this means you did a wonderful job, because I can definitely tell that's the reaction you were going for. ...

Well. That's a message. As our big star on the Dragons, it's only fitting that your captain help you get this out of the Green Room, no? Let's get to ...

Aaaand back again. I guess I'll just jump right in. General Comments: 1. I didn't mention it before, because I hadn't seen quite enough of the universe you've created, but ...

I'm back! I see I beat your regular reviewer so. I guess I'll just get on with this? General Comments: 1. UM. THE INNER GUILT MONOLOGUE WAS SO GOOD?! Like, ...

I'm back! Don't believe BlueAfrica when she tells you she gets bored with sci-fi. She reviewed every chapter of my humor/sci-fi during LMS III. But shh, that's secret. Let's get ...

Hi hello! Superheroes are just the best so of course I had to take a gander. Now then, review time: Writing Craft Comments: 1. So I will note that this ...

Hello! Man, people get so intimidated by short poems. Sorry you had to wait so long on a review! 1. Okay so I know that this is a short poem, ...