Ventomology

Dear Comtesse, that is the creepiest thing anyone could do to their father ever what is wrong with you. Oh my god. 1. I KNEW IT. I KNEW THEY WERE ...

Well. Finn came back sooner than I expected. I wonder if he'll be more of like a recurring opponent or if they'll get him back this time. 1. So this ...

Oh lord what a chapter. I think I need to brush my teeth. 1. God, the sense of taste in this chapter. It's so underutilized honestly, and then Isha went ...

Hello! I noticed this has been in the GR for a while, so I thought I'd come and offer what I can. I'm certainly not caught up with this piece ...

Hoo boy. I got exactly what I asked for, didn't I? ALSO: I am officially caught up! From here on, I hope I can give better reviews that reflect the ...

Wow, watch as all of them get thrown behind bars again for trespassing in the stinking crypts. These kids make the worst decisions I swear. But it wouldn't be a ...

Back at it again! I am so glad it's Friday. 1. Since you are in the habit of giving us cliff-hangers, I wonder why you chose to keep Finn's entire ...

Man, every single chapter feels like some big 'oh snap' moment. Let the children rest please. or don't. let them suffer. a lot. Also, I have started catching up on ...

I am gasping . Also nice turnaround! It's cool to have a skeleton guard introduced in like, a place where you could, conceivably, find some necromancy, and then have the ...

This story has mad Full Metal Alchemist vibes. (Which, if you have not watched/read, you totally should but anyways) Like, the general way that exploration and plot twists and new ...

AHHHHHH. They did it again !! Will they never stop getting captured?! AHHHH. Okay, now that I've freaked out, and you've successfully chased away my case of the Mondays, let's ...

I really don't know what to do with myself on weekends, so I came back? 1. This is a bit of a nitpick, but it seemed worth addressing. In the ...

Wow that was adorable. 1. I question the way that this scene fits in with the rest of the story. Whether or not you've included flashbacks before, it feels rather ...

Oooh, I don't think I've actually read a chapter from Carter's perspective yet. I really like the way he thinks! At some point I've got to go back through from ...

WOOOOOO. UGH THIS WAS SO GOOD. 1. Not gonna lie, the way you've put together this romance is very good , just from an objective perspective. I actually kind of ...