Venom

This was pretty good. I saw a few things that need to be fixed though. She stared at the blood drenching my shirt. I think it would sound better as, ...

Well...I can't really give you any feedback on this because it is only 5 sentences. Maybe you should have waited for your teacher to give you your notebook back before ...

I loved this book so much. I read it while I was on vacation and I finished it in 1 day. Once I started it, I couldn't put it down. ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think it is good as a short story rather than a multiple chapter story. Though, if you wanted to make it into a ...