VengefulReaper

Thanks for the review, Lim! The idea with the fish market was that it's supposed to be a pocket of low tech stuff that 'coincidentally' happens to be a whole ...

Thanks so much for the review Salis! I think I'll save the flashback for a later chapter when I go back and edit later on.

Hi Lim! Thanks so much for the review! I think I will end up shortening the flashback section. Alot of people have told me it seems out of place and ...

I knew I was doing something wrong! The trash is an excellent place to store notes (as I have found). Of course I made the mistake of keeping my notes ...

Thanks for the review, Andrew! Chapter 0 was actually an arc that happened later on in the novel but I decided to move it to the front. There's still quite ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to tone down the emotion for the moment and do some editing on this one!

Thanks for the review, Salis! I'm currently pretty overwhelmed with work at the moment so I'll get to reviewing some chapter for you this weekend hopefully.

Hi Lim! Thanks for the review! This prologue section was originally an entire arc that came directly after Chapter 7 but I decided to move it to the front because ...

Thanks so much for the review, Lim! I'm terrible with comma usage but now that you pointed it out, I'll pay special attention to them.

Thanks so much for the review! I do have a bad habit of being repetitive. Thanks for pointing that out, though because it's something I usually don't pick up on. ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! Now that you've pointed that out, I should really think about the AI's personality xD. I think characterizing her as an AI is misleading as ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely look into the metaphor. It does seem heavy-handed/too obvious. I think I'll just leave it at Steve putting the photo face-down and ...

Thank you so much for the review! It's good to have you back. Your feedback has helped me a lot so I really do appreciate your thoughts. As for the ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely shorten the descriptions in the beginning.

Thank you so much for the review!! Part of my intention with Steve's character was his obsession with catching Sigvald. He basically lives in Steve's head rent-free which is why ...