VengefulReaper

Hi Tikaya, Thanks for the review! I'll definitely post a full summary of the events up to now in the next chapter. Currently working on that. [quote]I find this part ...

Hi Lim, I know it's been a while but thank you for once again leaving a review. At the start of the next chapter, I plan to insert a small ...

Hi Lim. Thanks for the review! Another thing was this scene: I feel I have no context to know who to believe here - since when I remember first seeing ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! Somehow this review slipped through my notifications lol. DEfinitely going to revisit the sequence of events in the action scene as you mentioned. I think ...

Thanks for the review Lim! I agree that Damen being a masked soldier was TOO much of a surprise. I should probably make Troy notice him in the background of ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! With regards to how the royal family are functioning, I haven't really explained it here but the explanation is coming in a future chapter. Though ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! Yeah, I am going to rework the explanation of Adrian's failsafe so it's a little more understandable but you got the gist of it. I'll ...

Hi Rose. Thanks for the review! I'll have to tweak the explanation for the failsafe. Just to address your questions: Yes, he has radiation resistance...not full immunity. Hence why radiation ...

Thanks for the review, Rose! I'll definitely chop down on the exposition. Sometime my overly analytic brain overexplains something in an effort to oversimplify a topic and then in the ...

Hi Lim! Thanks so much for the review! Totally agree with you on the personality part. I%u2019ll have to include some hobbies or just some unrelated everyday dialogue by the ...

Thanks for the review, Rose! I keep forgetting the story is a kids' book lol. I'll have to downgrade the language there for sure! he has already been outside and ...

Thanks for the review, Rose! This story isn't necessarily inspired by Mission Impossible but the bunker sequence was, actually lol. I am kind of wary of making things *too* dramatic ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! This might be a silly question but: how does John know Steve is looking at him here? I forget how much John can/ cannot see. ...

idk. I kind of like the idea that Abigail does both coding and art. It's two different ends of the spectrum in terms of the mindset. Coding is incredibly process-driven ...

Hey Icy! I am going to stick to Adrian as his name for the narrator from now on. His aliases will pop up here and there but it won't be ...