Velvet

Hello Evi! My imediate thoughts after finishing reading your story (part 1 at least) were on how entertaining your words were, and how the pacing was just right - not ...

Hello MikaFreak123! I have a few things I can comment on regarding your story, but please know that these are some very subjective observations - more than telling you what ...

I will definitely participate!

A spell written on a ten thousand year-old grimoire which no one knows what's for and everyone is eager to try ^^

"I woke up and it was a good day." Just as powerful as a ball of cotton. Although I am laughing at some of the openings in here; at least ...

Hello Amy! Welcome to The Young Writers Society. I really don't think an introductory post is boring as it is serving a specific purpose, which fully delivers ^^ I am ...

At first this was reading to me like a monologue by a husband who was obsessed on getting his wife back; it looked like she had abandoned him and he ...

For me, what works best in this piece is the first paragraph, which opens a series of possibilities as it plays with the concepts of heat and cold, light and ...

We definitely didn't meet before, and thank you very much for the welcoming back!

I don't believe anyone remembers me from my beginning, but I just had to say it feels great to be here again! I'm looking forward to see what kind of ...

Hello Selene! Thank you for the nice welcoming, tips and friend offer ^^ Bolt, good to know all that (thank you for the offer, it's very kind of you). It ...

Hello Dreamwalker! *excited wave* Nice meeting you. Full caps, where? You made me go look in my posts to make sure I didn't use them. Rest assured I won't! Eccentric, ...

Hello Fireweed, This is a very interesting story: it tells of revolution and the spirit necessary to pursuit a rebellion that will make changes we want in our lives. I ...

Hello Bolt, nice meeting you! Velvet is absolutely fine, as well as any other name. Honestly, even if you call me Tootmaginging Pinneaple Conciounirge I'll know you mean me! Thank ...

Hello everyone, happy to be here :] I want to explore my writing skills and this seems like the perfect community to do so, since it looks so friendly and ...