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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Save Yourself....

    This is a great and very creative and insightful poem. It takes me into another world that is fascinating, yet terrible. It is a dramatic change from a sky full ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lights and Colors

    This story is very descriptive, like how you describe the lights and marketplace thing. Although that made it very interesting, I think the main character should be described a little ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Burning Skies

    I really liked this story! It was interesting to read through the simple words of a child. I greatly enjoy reading about war time stories, even though most, like yours, ...

    Aug 2, 2011


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