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My script, Scavengers has gotten 10 views and no comments... :evil: So... I need reviews because this is something I actually will shoot in the near future. Please help me! ...

Capturing!! Personally, I think it should be turned into a movie and made longer than Nineteen minutes. A lot of action in this one little piece, so, if it were ...

Very dark... I like it! Just a few minor spelling issues.. she doesnt care Doesn't, is how it's spelled. you cry you're self to sleep You're self should be yourself ...

Nice job! You have a very absorbing and original plot. I actually think it would do well as a movie, to be honest. And I do agree with Napalmerski on ...

Hmm.. interesting. There are a few things wrong with it, though. Here they are. Student one: A lo-cal hist-or-y thing is this used in a certain tone? You have to ...

sorry to hear that. :(

but most people making the movies are in it for the money and fame. I'm not really like that. It's kind of sad what's happening to the condition of movies. ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. 3 characters have been taken from the film. Scavengers (Scene three) (We cut to Adrian, sleeping in his bed. He ...

Well, I fixed certain elements that were wrong with the script, but here's what I didn't. You still have entire enter spaces between the names and dialogue. Yeah, my script-writing ...

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Ok... you won your dare, that's for dang sure. I like it. You are very articulate, and you set your characters and plot nicely. However... your plot makes no sense. ...

I don't mean to offend, I was just telling you what was wrong and what was right. I like it. You're taking an interesting turn on a traditional story, but ...

I'm not quite sure what you're writing, but I think it would be appropriate for a Monty Python sketch, or something on Family Guy. It makes no sense. I like ...

I'm going to be very harsh here... and I'm sorry for this... it was pretty bad. You don't use punctuation, you don't capatalize, LOTS of spelling errors. There are plotholes, ...