Vasticity

Hello! I'm 14 and I LOVE Lost. And! If you ever have general questions refer to this topic: Also, if you have questions about a specific literary forum, check out ...

Wow, I sure wasn't expecting the part at the end. :shock: Anyhoo, in terms of errors, you don't add commas in many places. For example: What about you Kashmere? What ...

Hi Blakiee. You sound very daring. Incorporate that into your writing. I always enjoy a story like that. If you have general questions, check this out. If you have any ...

I am shocked and amazed that the other reviewers were not noticing the things I did. First off, post this in advanced critiques and rate it R, okay? Secondly, a ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film. Scavengers (Scene Six) (Adrian and Cody walk down the straightaway that leads ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film. Scavengers (Scene Five) (We cut to Adrian and Cody, in the garage. ...

Hey! What type of writing do you enjoy most? Is my question, and welcome to YWS! If you need general rules, visit this: And for rules about the specific forums, ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film. SCAVENGERS (Scene Four) (We fade in to Calvin and Norman, walking down ...

Very good! Although I do agree with the first reviews, if it's sort of a 1st draft-type thing, then I'll allow it to pass. My only advice? Make it longer. ...

Hi! I hate thank-you letters too. Anyway, welcome to YWS. I'm a newbie, and I'm 14 as well, so we're on the same page. If you have any questions, ask ...

Liked this a lot!! Anyhoo... You certainly paint a picture, and I can't really see any spelling errors, so... there's nothing wrong with it. I'm looking forward to the continuing ...

Hello! :D I like it, but there's a few issues... Sometimes, People wonder capatalizing people is unessecary. You think, why am i happy? Capatalize the I... You cant feel yourself ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. :D Since you're new, I recommend that when you enter a new forum, read the topics posted by Nate that explain the rules of those individual ...

I'm a bit of a newb too, Emily, so you're not alone. Although you get the concept pretty fast. At the beginning of each forum, there is a topic by ...

Wow, I only read about one book a day. Two, if my brain is enduring. :) And... welcome to YWS. I'm a bit of a newb too. So anyway, post ...