Vasticity

Tell your friend that I like his artwork! There are a few issues, however. I don't know if this picture is in the beginning stages, but if it is, he ...

Hello there. I am Vasticity, Vast, or just Vas. Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions, PM a mod, or at least someone who has had a lot of ...

Hello! I just finished the seventh book a few weeks ago. I'm a film-maker, writing... obviously, scripts! :D You've already got the questions to a moderator thing down. So... if ...

First off, I like it! It's very interestingly formatted and written. There's only a few things that don't work. they (the leaves) make their annual trip to the ground. We ...

I like it! :D Kind of an odd premise for a poem, but aren't all ideas for poems that way? I wish it were longer, though. It seems to short ...

It's very interesting, and well-written. I can't really see any errors, except that it's too short. :( So write more, and keep writing! :mrgreen:

I love YWS too!! I'll be looking around for your posts and I'll review if I can. is where you can get general rules for the site, and if you ...

I am intrigued, and would read if anything else was posted regarding this. Anyway, whenever I review something, I usually find something wrong with it. Man after man fell the ...

You don't do the comma thing in this one! Yay! I only see two things wrong: I’m a murderer, and every murderer can tell how someone was killed, I really ...

HI! To you as well. I am VASTICITY, and this is YWS. If you were interested in poetry, you came to the right site. Do you want general rules about ...

This chapter was as good as the first, but you're still doing that comma thing. Add commas where they need to be added, such as here: “Now run along you ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film. Scavengers (Scene Seven) (Calvin walks down an empty hall. You can hear ...

Hi! I've always been really interesting in drawings and paintings, so your skill intrigues me. Anyway, welcome to YWS! For general rules about the site, refer to this: Got a ...

This isThe Man stands next to me trying to feel what he could not. interesting so far. But there are certain issues... leaning over their desks’ desks. There isn't an ...

This is a very interesting beginning to a story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest, if you ever post it. Anyway, I agree with some of the stuff ...