Vasticity

This is very nice. I see where you're coming from with this poem, and I can relate a little. Partly, I agree with Tenyo. Make it a bit longer, cause ...

that's really amazing. Just spectacular. I'm not a big painting guy (more of a sculpture and comic guy) but this has great shading and colors. It looks like a bird ...

I liked all of them except for the tea joke. I like tea, personally... but anyway. You've got the style of 'The Far Side,' in your jokes and your drawing. ...

unlike most poems I review, yours actually has a beat to it for having mismatched amounts of words and syllables, so NICE JOB!!! *gives a gold star* :elephant: No more ...

First off, you need punctuation and capitalizing. For instance: then in the end hes happy and smiles then a bird poos on him. You're missing an apostrophe in the area ...

Hi. First off, this isn't the type of story that appeals to me, but I can see how it might be popular in the world with you kids and your ...

Well, I've certainly had these sorts of nights before, so I can like it more thoroughly due to my relation to the story at hand. I like the wording, the ...

I like the wording and what story you're trying to interpret, but sometimes, you have a first line that has 5 words, and then your next word has 9 or ...

wow, awesome work, dude. You've got it very detailed, and just abstract enough so that it is like other famous paintings, such as The Scream, but not so abstract that ...

I completely agree with Elinor in every way. I'm getting kind of sick of the whole cross-over movies/books with other movies/books. BUT! If you would put a little initiative into ...

Wow, this is deep, I have to be honest with you. I really like it, and you paint a clear picture of what you're interpreting with your words. I've read ...

It was pretty funny, it made me laugh. But, I have to be the big stickler, and show you how to make proper scripts. First off, this is not a ...

Nice job! You're very descriptive, making the story believable. You almost bring us into this world you've written out. There are a few issues, however. On numerous occasions, you do ...

Scavengers (Scene Ten) [Slow-Motion: Adrian carries Cody's body down the staircase, and walks past the camera. We cut to him taking Calvin's pulse. He looks up at the man beside ...

awesome. Very descriptive, well thought out, and, most of all, truthful! Words can turn into anything with a little imagination, and you certainly seem to get the idea. Keep writing! ...