Vasticity

Nice work, considering you just used paint. I especially like how you had the tree turn blurry and sort-of grayish (I don't know if you did that deliberately) when you ...

First off, As you are in love with Henry VIII As I am with my history teacher :smt103 Something about the wording of this poem doesn't fit with me. Mind ...

Hi. I like your descriptions, and the story seems very interesting, but there are a few problems. First off, my English textbook says, 'Do not format your descriptions as though ...

I like your formatting of the poem, I mean, who wouldn't. Also, there is a good and meaningful message behind this, which is stick through it. You obviously saw that ...

ERADICATION (Scene Two) (We cut to a folder being dropped onto a table. We zoom out to reveal Evan Rand, sitting down in front of the table. The camera zooms ...

ERADICATION (Scene One) (We open to a glass of red wine, which is trembling slightly. Suddenly, a hand reaches out, and lifts the glass out of the camera's view. We ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. My name is Vasticity, or just Vast or Vas. Here's your basic rule-book to our little community: I'm sure you probably have more questions than just ...

Nice. It's just like Sin City, where certain elements are in color, but other parts of it are black and white. It adds to the beauty of your flower. But ...

I thought this was cute. It almost reminds me a lot of Macavity: The Mystery Cat, by T.S. Elliot, which you may or may not be aware of, is the ...

Very nice. I see you've paid great attention and truly enjoy Lewis Carroll's work. Anyway, down to business. Normally I have to instruct people on the beat of the poem, ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. My name is Vasticity, or just Vast or Vas. Here's your basic rule-book to our little community: I'm sure you probably have more questions than just ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. My name is Vasticity, or just Vast or Vas. Here's your basic rule-book to our little community: I'm sure you probably have more questions than just ...

Nice job! Normally I have to tell people about the beat, and fading in and out from rhyming to not rhyming, but you seem to have everything involving that under ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. My name is Vasticity, or just Vast or Vas. Here's your basic rule-book to our little community: I'm sure you probably have more questions than just ...

Hi. You have great imagination when you're writing this, and the imagery you display in your words really sets off the storyline. It's hard to understand what you're trying to ...