Vasticity

I'm thinking of shaving myself bald and getting a tony stark beard or this one: here's a picture of me: Picture 002.jpg part of the reason is because I'm tired ...

I like it! A lot! I'm not usually one for poems, but this was very interesting. 'cept for one thing: Well, you've got the gist This is kind of an ...

Hey. I liked this, I guess there's just a few things I have problems with.... like, for instance, all these things: 1. Formatting (Ext-Evening. The sun is beginning to dip ...

Add some headphones playing some super special awesome music, and it made for a pretty awesome half hour. would you stop saying super special awesome? It stopped being funny fifteen ...

Well, I recentley became endowed with superpowers, so this is me now: Picture 027.jpg And you're so pretty, Lauren. :mrgreen: I'm totally not a creeper. :shock:

As the movie expert, I look more into the themes and the message the movie is attempting to portray. So you may disagree with me on my choices, if you're ...

I'm finally going to post in one of these. So! This is me before Rogaine: unmasked3.jpg and this is me after Rogaine: Picture 024.jpg and yes, I was signing off ...

Ok, this is an interesting story, not really my type, but interesting. But here's the deal. Your script format is OFF. Way off. Here's all the basics: Lily- So, um, ...

I like the pictures, you have very nice detailing and color, but I don't like the perspective on the 1st and 4th drawings. It seems very strange and sort of ...

This is kind of confusing, but I'm sure all will be cleared up once the story begins. So let's begin! It was an ugly morning, Sunday I think. There should ...

This is a really awesome poem. It's got great structuring, perfect rhyming, an interesting storyline, and a good beat. The cuts in my paper thin, paper skin Normally, I'm not ...

Ok. Let's start. I like this poem, it's very structured and well written, but there's an issue. I used to go out at sea by night, when the skies were ...

First off, this is an interesting and new idea for a script, but there are a few issues. Let's begin. Every once and a while, you have punctuation, capitalization, and ...

You seem to have a very high opinion of yourself. I'm just joking. :D As with the other review of your work that I've given you, this is great. But ...

This is an awesome poem. It's perfectly structured, with good words, beat, and a well-interpreted storyline. I wish I could give you more of a critique, but there's really nothing ...