Vasticity

This is very well done. It has a good beat, an interesting story behind it, nice rhyming, all that. There is one problem that I discovered with it, however, which ...

Hey. Normally I'm not one for poems, but this came off really well and you did a good job with it. I just have a few problems. a lot of ...

Hi. This whole situation with your plot and everything intrigues me, but the problem is that sometime I think the dialog and the narration seems a bit strange, or unrealistic. ...

INT. NATHANIEL'S HOUSE-MIDNIGHT Nathaniel opens the door that leads into his home. The lights are all shut off. He drops a bag that he was carrying onto the floor, and ...

Hey. This had an interesting plot, and you seemed to pull it off well, I guess I just had a few problems with the basic structure of the story. First ...

I've always been intrigued by movies or books that capture the essence of a ghost story and make into something that truly sends chills up your back. This did that. ...

EXT. GRAVEYARD-EVENING Rain begins to fall from a dark, overcast sky, onto a crowd of funeral-goers, standing in front of a closed casket. The people open up black umbrellas and ...

Hi. I really liked this. Interesting premise, interesting characters, and some great description. This seems to be my type of story, but the problem is that you seem to be ...

I like the new look! Definitely way different. How long does it take you to do? it takes like 5 minutes after my morning shower

yes, that's my little brother. He's a monster.

A few weeks back I asked if I would look good bald with a tony stark beard. I'm going to stick with my new look and still get the beard. ...

okay. First off, your formatting is so off, I don't even know if I can certify this as a script. Secondly, this is so long, that I almost quit reading ...

I think I'm just going to start slicking my hair back and grow the beard

I've tried, but it just goes back the same. It's got a mind of its own

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