Vasticity

All right. I like the story, I'm just going to cover a few things. In a lot of places, you lack necessary punctuation. Here's one example: Kirks bunk mate, Owen, ...

This story speaks a lot to me. The way you say that you shouldn't care about what people who hate you think about you is and has always been my ...

Let me just start off by saying I haven't reviewed in a few months, so I'm a little rusty. It's short, but it gives a valid impression of what you ...

American: 12 Canadian: 3 English: 5 Filipino: 2 Finnish: 1 French: 1 Indian: 5 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...

This is my first review in a while, so forgive me, I'm a little rusty. You really managed to capture the spirit of what is going on in your story ...

INT. MED CYLINDER-MORNING Nathaniel steps inside his MED cylinder. A feedback sound screeches, and Logan clears his throat over the P.A. NATHANIEL Set up yet, Logan? LOGAN Ready out here. ...

INT. WAREHOUSE-NIGHT Nathaniel unlocks the door to the MED room and steps inside. He takes a seat in front of the computer desk. He pushes a button on the table. ...

This is my imaginary poster for Atomization, my script on here. (only partially finished) sorry about the weird coloring and bad editing, I did this on windows paint and accidentally ...

Let me just start off by saying I don't listen to music with lyrics, so I'm not going to critique the song overall. I'm going to critique your spelling, punc., ...

Let me just start off by saying I don't like this kind of music, so I'm not going to give a critique on the quality of it, and what it's ...

INT. ITALIAN RESTURAUNT-DAY Nathaniel walks up to a table in the middle of a resturaunt. A few employees are shouting things in Italian. Nathaniel takes his seat, and Alan enters ...

EXT. CITY STREET-DAY SANDRA MITCHELL walks down the sidewalk. She approaches a telephone pole with a piece of paper stuck on it. The paper reads: 'Attention, all film enthusiasts! Have ...

hey, trying to sell this movie, and I need it to be perfect. It's posted in parts, of course, so if you want them all: 3- you don't have to ...

INT. NATHANIEL'S BEDROOM-Day Nathaniel is sitting on his bed, reading the manual closely. ALAN (V.O.) Now, before this book ends, I'd like to bring a few things to your attention. ...

hey, amu. Lemme start off by saying you almost have the formatting right. But I'll just list off the issues. First off, when you list a character's name, just before ...