VassternichDrauka

Back at you. ;) It's all good. I don't always have the time to respond to things either, or to post them. >.< I've got eleven chapters written out, and ...

I'm glad you're back for more. :) She does have a bit of a running commentary in this one. I do love it. True, that is a little funky... I'll ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like the introduction. She's a busy little girl, isn't she? I specifically had her call her father "da" instead of dad. ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm a little confused about your suggestion. I don't quite understand what you mean by "go back to the line." I'm pretty familiar with ...

Thanks so much for this review! I can't wait to read your opinions of the other chapters. I'm so glad you liked it. Some of my names do get a ...

I've posted the book-jacket synopsis as a blog. I hope this helps give a better sense of the world. Thank you again! -Vass

I posted the book-jacket synopsis I wrote. I thought it might help clarify the setup of this world a little better. Thank you again! -Vass

Thank you for the review. :) I hope you feel inclined to continue the story. Thank you - I have been working on strengthening my voice. If I may ask, ...

Hey, thanks for the review. :) Perhaps this is just my own experience, but I've seen (within my own family) that is perfectly possible for a young child to knock ...

Hey, thanks for the review. :) I've noticed that a few of the issues that you've pointed out seem to be coming from the fact that in this chapter, I ...