VanTheWritingMan

Hello readers! I hope you guys enjoyed my story! Feel free to make any improvements or suggestions to the title as well as the story! Thanks!

Hey RebelWriter! Great story but it just needs some more editing. In the first paragraph, "Him" should have been "him" (capitalization mistake). Also, it would have made more sense if ...

Hey RebelWriter! Great story but it just needs some more editing. In the first paragraph, "Him" should have been "him" (capitalization mistake). Also, it would have made more sense if ...

Thanks so much for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! :^)

Thanks, I'll make sure to check on my punctuation, spelling, and paragraph size for next time! Sorry if it was too predictable!

Great! I'll definitely keep this in mind as I write my next story!

Thanks for all those suggestions and taking your time to write a review! I will certainly take them into consideration! :^)

Thanks for the review and sorry for the late response! Thanks for the great suggestions. I will make sure to use them in my next work! :^)

Thanks for the review and sorry for the late response! I absolutely agree with the stiffness part of the dialogue. It is something that I definitely need to work on ...

Thanks for the review and sorry for the late response! This story was meant to be a short excerpt from their lives. I gave a little bit of background information ...

Thanks for the review and sorry for the late response! This was actually just a short exercise that I was using to practice my dialogue. It was just to show ...

Hi there Inspiredravens! Your poem is beautifully written with only a few misleading parts in it. Here are the stanzas that stood out to me. Stanza 6 was mentioned in ...