Vampyre

Thanks, glad you liked it :) And the stranger was Death, come to take John to his graaave *spooky voice* 'Pyre

Well then, I commend you. I really like the way you manage to make it look like a first poem and also have it readable and well written! One thing ...

Aww thanks guys :) Aweqs, I can't change the "Which mannerly devotion is shown in this?" Because that's a Shakespeare quote, but the others are all good suggestions I shall ...

First of all, thank you for your review :) I found it really helpful and I will try to rework it accordingly, your points are all valid :) Only thing ...

First of all, thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it :) Yeah, I debated about that, but came to the conclusion that as Death had asked John's colleague ...

Hehe yay, it's just so nice and refreshing to see someone take care of their grammar :)

Thanks guys :) Gad you likey XD Pink: No, I do NOT sparkle :P I'm a proper Vampyre XD I just prefer that spelling, it's so much more...archaic. Anyway, on ...