VampireSenshi

I love this!!! Although i would enjoy a mor in depth description, but other than that... Awesome. I would like to this there is a sort of metaphor for anguish ...

I really enjoyed the concept of this. Sometimes i feel that i have this power, and then i realize i don't and i go cry in a corner. But that's ...

Thank You guys so much, I noticed the spelling errors right after i posted it and kind of kicked myself. But nobody's perfect i suppose. I know how you feel ...

So this is a tidbit of a story that I’m co-writing with a friend. It’s about a man named Paradox. I will post a background story for him later, but ...

I love the concept of finding something old and magical in the farest reigons of an old place like an attic or basement. And then it leads to something more, ...

I agree with LeahWierd! This story is becoming increasingly better! And now we have a climax! Now we can get down to the action! That, i can't wait for! I ...

Dude!!! This is amazing! I haven't read the other parts, but its totally sparking my interest. Publish this, i would buy it. Setiously, keep writing!!! 11/10

This was a very good story. I enjoyed the drama and the action, but could do with alittle more of an introduction. I dont know if you have posted the ...

that was a fun little tidbit, and i can't wait for the next part of the story to progress. Are there other parts that you posted? Anyway, i hope that ...

I really liked this story, but i didn't get something. Are they wizards? Sorry if i didn't read attentivly enough to get the details but i didn't seem to be ...

Thanks so much for the tips. I find that i have the same problems in my writing allways. I liked that you understood the point of whether or not blinking ...

Well, thankyou so mush for the tips. But the vary was supposed to be misspelled, is if he was using an accent. And i also didn't like this very mych ...

I am a little confused on whether this story belongs in general fiction or science fiction because it doesn't take place in the future... Other than that, here is the ...

I absolutly love the concept, but the grammer did need a little tweeking (But who am i to talk about grammer). I like the use of magic and magic words, ...

Wow, I can hardly put into words the way i feel about this story... Well maybe i can, it was interesting. Yes! Very, very, interesting... I struggled to get the ...