VampierKnight

Thank you xavia-finch for your advice...I really like your ideas and I'll look it over and see what I can do to tell you the truth I put this all ...

xavia-finch I'm only saying things like unhelpful things like "Wow this sucks keep working on it." that type of stuff I'm OK with criticizing I'm OK just if you have ...

This is only an idea so I only need a yes or no or some ideas for this please don't heasatate I love other people's suggestions. Mind you I haven't ...

I really liked the first one I thought it was very well wrote with a lot of well said vocabulary. I do have one problem with it that it might ...