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VamPirate

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Good Byes Are Harder Than Hellos.

    It was cute, but sometimes it did seem a bit forced. I quite liked that last line, although the penultimate line did seem a bit similar to the first line ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Repunzal's Story

    Cute piece, but I agree with what all them lot up there *points* said about the forced rhyming. I hate having to write a rhyming poem, and when we have ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fingering A Gun

    A while a go not far from here, Surely this should be ' A while ago '. His face was sad, with a tear on his face , Do you ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNoMusic

    I love Lily Allen! I usually put on something that me and my boyfriend wrote/sang. We write the lyrics together, I sing, he plays guitar. (He is soooo sweet!). I ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: Have a NaNoWrant!

    I. Suck. It's official. I would probably take up most of your time by ranting about every single thing in my NaNo, but I'll be slightly kinder. * I hate ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07

    Only about 5,118... But it is the first time that I've ever done NaNoWriMo (Don't shout at me!), so I think I'm doing pretty well for a newbie! If anyone ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • Archive Re: The Seekers

    I love evil characters. Is Eris a girl? If she is, I call Eris! - VamPirate

    Oct 29, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: Newbie to Nano

    I'm another NaNo newbie, but my parents don't believe that I should spend all of my time writing! How can I convince them that this is actually what I want ...

    Oct 29, 2007
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNoWriMo 2007

    I have never done NaNoWriMo before, but I thought it looked a really good idea. Thing is, I can never get motivated enough to get up early to fit in ...

    Oct 28, 2007
  • Official Polls Re: What Perspective Do You Like To Write In?

    My style changes between novels, although I would probably have to agree with many other people and go for First and Third person. Thank you for opening my eyes to ...

    Oct 28, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: This word reminds me of...

    Hair... VamPirate

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate avatars!!!!

    Cute avatar. Kinda...haunting. I give it an 8/10 (Hope I'm not being too harsh, I only just joined!) VamPirate

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Official Polls Re: Which printing format do you prefer?

    Paperbacks for just one reason: They're way cheaper than hardbacks! I am so skint most of the time, and I want to buy as many books as possible, so I ...

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thinking of Things Unsaid

    I liked this poem, but I felt that the topic was such a good one that there could be so many other things that could have been said. Oh, the ...

    May 24, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Dancing Girl

    I agree with Skye, but I think it was a beautiful poem. It does have a great flow, and the subject matter works too. I'd like to see some more...

    Apr 9, 2007


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X