VamPirate

It was cute, but sometimes it did seem a bit forced. I quite liked that last line, although the penultimate line did seem a bit similar to the first line ...

Cute piece, but I agree with what all them lot up there *points* said about the forced rhyming. I hate having to write a rhyming poem, and when we have ...

A while a go not far from here, Surely this should be ' A while ago '. His face was sad, with a tear on his face , Do you ...

I love Lily Allen! I usually put on something that me and my boyfriend wrote/sang. We write the lyrics together, I sing, he plays guitar. (He is soooo sweet!). I ...

I. Suck. It's official. I would probably take up most of your time by ranting about every single thing in my NaNo, but I'll be slightly kinder. * I hate ...

Only about 5,118... But it is the first time that I've ever done NaNoWriMo (Don't shout at me!), so I think I'm doing pretty well for a newbie! If anyone ...

I love evil characters. Is Eris a girl? If she is, I call Eris! - VamPirate

I'm another NaNo newbie, but my parents don't believe that I should spend all of my time writing! How can I convince them that this is actually what I want ...

I have never done NaNoWriMo before, but I thought it looked a really good idea. Thing is, I can never get motivated enough to get up early to fit in ...

My style changes between novels, although I would probably have to agree with many other people and go for First and Third person. Thank you for opening my eyes to ...

Hair... VamPirate

Cute avatar. Kinda...haunting. I give it an 8/10 (Hope I'm not being too harsh, I only just joined!) VamPirate

Paperbacks for just one reason: They're way cheaper than hardbacks! I am so skint most of the time, and I want to buy as many books as possible, so I ...

I liked this poem, but I felt that the topic was such a good one that there could be so many other things that could have been said. Oh, the ...

I agree with Skye, but I think it was a beautiful poem. It does have a great flow, and the subject matter works too. I'd like to see some more...