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Re: Abandoned City
I couldn't really picture the story in my head. I don't think there was enough imagery. Also, I think there was too much talking, not enough discription or excitement. I ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Death Trilogy-Book 1-Chapter 1
Well, I think it was nice, but if I walked into a bookstore and picked it up and read the first page, I think I'd get bored and put it ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knights
I think it was very nice and very descriptive. But, I do think it was sort of boring in the begining. I was going to stop reading, but I urged ...
May 18, 2008