Valnaria

I couldn't really picture the story in my head. I don't think there was enough imagery. Also, I think there was too much talking, not enough discription or excitement. I ...

Well, I think it was nice, but if I walked into a bookstore and picked it up and read the first page, I think I'd get bored and put it ...

I don't get a lot of these things. "Do any of your main characters have names longer than three syllables?" Yes, but so what? I agree with Zeige. Fantasy isn't ...

I think it was very nice and very descriptive. But, I do think it was sort of boring in the begining. I was going to stop reading, but I urged ...

Well, my friend was writing a story once and couldn't think of something, so she handed it over to me to make sure she didn't write, and when I gave ...

Well, when I write the first chapter I try to introduce the main character, but not so openly, a bit more wide spread as if just tinkling a few details ...

Hi, I'm Valnaria(Vally, if you wish) and I absolutely love to write! Well, of course I do, because then why would I be on here? I love animals and my ...